The Velvet of My Poetry

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the thoughts they circle in my head they twirl they settle one by one words dripping from my pen abstract in links and chains till in colors delectable appear all the velvet images Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~IN THE GARDEN OF MY FANTASY~ 2023 Read on air by invitation ~ February 25, 2021 'DOUBLE HELIX' AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on October 31, 2020

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Sierra Chen

Date: 11/19/2020 2:08:00 PM

excellent piece

William Darnell Sr.

Date: 11/11/2020 11:45:00 AM

You're a smooth operator of the quill, Line. The circles, the twirls, drippings, and abstracts from the quill were written, well-penned, Line! I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Thank you. Best of Wishes, William

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/17/2020 8:40:00 PM

Thank you very much for your lovely comment, William. Most appreciated.

John Lawless

Date: 10/31/2020 9:30:00 AM

OHHH.....Line, this is so smooth and dare I say...."velvetty"

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2020 12:30:00 PM

lol thanks, John ~

Silent One

Date: 10/31/2020 7:59:00 AM

Simply beautiful...

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2020 12:30:00 PM

thank you very much, SO ~