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The Vampire Came Calling

I was working alone late one night, When something occurred that gave me a fright. Outside my window the moon shone bright, And I saw something strange in the pale moonlight. Out on the lawn in the shadows was lurking, A figure, a shadow, furtively searching, For a way to get in under cover of darkness, And I stifled a scream, sought panic to harness. The figure was tall, slender and lith, And as it moved it seemed to drift, Seeming to float as it moved place to place, And a cold, clammy sweat ran down my face. I rushed to make certain the windows and doors, Were all locked and barred as I ran 'cross the floor. I turned on the lights both inside and out, And as I did I heard a great shout. Please turn off the lights and let me come in. I will not harm you I come as a friend. I did not answer and ran to my room, But the voice followed me, seeming to croon. I wish not to harm or cause aggravation, And I cannot enter without invitation. Please come to the door and open to me, And I'll give you a gift that will set you free. Such power you'll have that you cannot dream. I covered my ears and tried not to scream. I felt myself weaken and prayed aloud, Lord, let not my senses this demon becloud. My prayer was answered, the demon was gone, Th'out leaving a sign outside on the lawn. The voice in my head just drifted away, And did not return in the bright light of day. I know that somewhere the vampire lies sleeping, Waiting for night to come out a-creeping. When the moon is high and the hour is late, I'll sit by the door with my Cross and wait.

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Date: 10/20/2019 8:02:00 PM
This was a great write!
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/21/2019 3:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 2:30:00 PM
Great storytelling Judy... Nice to see you posting
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/21/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. As long as strength holds out I will keep posting. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 2:17:00 PM
GREAT vampire poem, Judy. Yeah, you don't not let them IN your house, just be very careful walking outside at night!!!
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/21/2019 3:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 1:55:00 PM
Judy, fantastic write, with great imagery emotion and feeling.. love it
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/21/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 1:16:00 PM
Wow Judy - this poem is very very entertaining, scary and creatively penned - the last two lines I Love - God will be right by the door with you as you pray. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. P.S I really enjoy your God given faith - just pure and kind.
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/21/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 12:37:00 PM
- A sinister tale, Judy ... I struggle to rhyme in English ... I am impressed by your skill :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/21/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 12:06:00 PM
Chilling read. Beautifully executed.
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/20/2019 11:15:00 PM
Thank you so much ML. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 9:59:00 AM
Wow Judy, love it
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/20/2019 11:44:00 AM
Thank you so much TS. God Bless. JB
Date: 10/20/2019 9:17:00 AM
Love it! Great story telling. Hugs Rick. Thanks for your visit.
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/20/2019 11:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Rick. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/20/2019 7:17:00 AM
Good my friend...Good message
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/20/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Arturo. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/19/2019 11:14:00 PM
Don't forget the holy water, garlic, wooden stake and the 'Muller' report. Great poem. Have a good day.
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/20/2019 12:05:00 AM
Thank you so much David. God Bless, JB
Date: 10/19/2019 9:34:00 PM
well crafted poetic tale you told here...great flow too...as a child i was always afraid of vampires, because we always watched vampire movies with my dad...i would pull my covers around my neck to fall asleep and pray they wouldn't come get me...good poem... :) hugs
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/20/2019 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra. I pulled the covers tight over my head with just my nose sticking out.lol God Bless, JB
Date: 10/19/2019 9:33:00 PM
Oooh! A really scary one... In today's parlance, you didn't let yourself get 'scammed' by that sweet-talking spook. Good for you. Awesome write, Judy. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Judy Ball
Date: 10/19/2019 11:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon. God Bless, JB

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