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The Valley of Loss


There is a sunken valley in my heart 
     that draws me in to think of my demise.
 A valley that appears mid-senior years;
     a time when deaths demand final goodbyes.

The valley of my loss of treasured friends
     is filling up much faster than I guessed.
Sad wakes and funerals, I now attend
     to say goodbye and pray they are at rest.

My dearest kinfolk, in this valley too,
     depart from me at such a daunting rate.
Both elders and my peers- I see them fade
     as they leave life to enter Heaven's gate.

And I will join them in this valley too-
     tho know my time to leave is not yet clear.
But years fly fast, and when that time arrives
     know I will sink the hearts that held me near.
    

Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Empty Your Soul With Words
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 11/25/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 3:26 PM
Exquisite write - phrasing, rhythm, rhyme, and such lovely content, melancholy but sublime. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - blessings!
La France Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 7:14 AM
Sandra, so beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest !
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:34 AM
I enjoyed your contest, Constance, and appreciate my wonderful placement. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Wigley Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 1:24 AM
I'm on your wavelength with this winning write, Sandra, I too seem to be wearing black an awful lot. Congratulations on a fine piece. Viv x
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Yes, Viv, it is a sad time of life indeed. I appreciate your visit and supportive comments very much. Thanks! Sandra
Ashley Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Returning with my congratulations Sandra on your 1st place win with this deeply poignant poem.. Called it.. lol! Warmest wishes ~Susan
Haight Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Susan, thank you so much for stopping back with your wonderful congrats and comments. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 5:39 PM
Such a moving poem Sandra which i can also relate to so much on a personal level as I have attended so many funerals this year and have another one on Thursday and one with a date to be arranged:-( hugs jan xx
Davey Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Pulling from the depth of your soul to write this one, congratulations Sandra
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November 25, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on your win, Sandra. This poem is poignant and yet I feel as if I'm hearing your thoughts, not words. Nicely done.
Ashley Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Such a soulful, stirring and heartfelt write Sandra. Very deeply emotional and eloquently and beautifully expressed. A compelling poem that I loved and enjoyed! Good luck in the contest but already a winner!!
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Hi, Susan...still catching up with replies. But so appreciate your visit and very uplifting and positive comments. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Absolutely beautiful and so moving, Sandra--my new favorite! Janice
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Stebbings Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 4:00 PM
I empathise with you, Sandra. Good luck in the Contest. // Barry
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Thanks, Barry, for your supportive comments! Sandra
Goff Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Eloquent rhythm, meaningful message, superb poem, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:49 AM
Thank you so much, James. Much appreciated. Sandra
Wanter Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Thank you for writing this - it rings with truth and empathy with many of us.
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Thank you, Sunlite, for your supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
One Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 11:15 AM
You really did empty your soul in this deep emotive write... An excellent write
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Thanks, Silent One. Happy you felt the emotion, and I appreciate your positive comment. Sandra
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