The Urban Battlefield

(The final utterance and testament
of a fallen comrade. Belfast 1979)

He
never knew
till he laid there naked.
(A withering heap of travesty.)
How blue the sky
how green the grass,
each tiny blade reminiscent
of a gentle touch from a bygone age.
Each wound on fire,
yet a confound complement
to a burning passion
of a love he was about
to leave behind.
He 
saw formidable clouds
begin to threaten
the moment,
yet gently
refreshing droplets
tantalize the mood,
blend with a body
and it’s blood, before
washing a mind
free of it’s pain
forever!

  © Harry J Horsman 1994
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 2:47 PM
Intense and sad. Well written and a fine tribute to those who pay the ultimate price in battle. Congrats on your win ~ John
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September 26, 2020 at 7:11 PM
This touched me deeply, Harry. What a powerful, impactful piece of writing. Many congrats on your top-notch win. ~Elaine
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 5:04 PM
such a moving piece harry many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 26, 2020 at 8:05 AM
Harry, this is so descriptive and moving. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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July 14, 2015 at 1:26 AM
Hi Harry, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your amazing win! :)Alexis
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July 13, 2015 at 6:04 PM
An incredible write, Harry! Powerful imagery that places the reader in the middle of the moment. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 4:08 PM
oh my, I cannot believe I NEVER saw this one before?? I thought I had combed the back pages for every single one of your poems! Yet I do not see my name among the commenters going back to 2010. this is GOOD stuff, Harry. YAY for your amazing win.
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July 13, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Beautiful. Such gritty imagery. Congrats on your win, Harry! xoxo
A  Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:15 AM
Harry, thank you for the support... SKAT
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September 21, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Harry, I would imagine when one feels life slipping away is when they appreciate it most as when you convey "How blue the sky, how green the grass". A truly brilliant understanding of human emotions in regard to separation of soul from body. I was very moved by this poem and feel it is one of your best.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:55 PM
Oh harry so emotional and heart wrenching.. deeply touching write and special piece of poetry my friend.. appreciate all your warm and welcome comments always my friend..with luv...
Culverhouse Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 9:17 AM
sad write...I am wiping tears in GA. Dying with dignity is an ironic statement/oxymoron or something like that. usually we don't choose how we die...maybe how we are buried.
A  Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 11:43 AM
hELLO, HARRY! ENJOYED*LUV~SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 7:07 AM
Interesting Bio...Glad that you found lines five through eight so that your penned words can delight us..Sara
Cook Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 7:02 PM
I am deeply moved by this poem. The images, the evocation of mood and place, the reflection on sacrifice and violence, all are very powerful. And it remains somber, never becoming sentimental. - Bill Cook
Wilson Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 11:35 AM
one can picture themselves there were that soldier..very well written Take care~Deb
Brown Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 11:10 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Haeey. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Very moving and touchy poem. enjoyed it, harry.
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September 16, 2010 at 5:40 AM
The reader can feel the pain of this man dying on the urban battlefield, Harry. We get a clear picture of what he was seeing and the way he felt when the raindrops came and his mind was washed of its pain. Very moving poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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September 16, 2010 at 5:22 AM
Excellent account of a dying soldier's last visions and thoughts, Harry. Very well composed.
Neels Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 3:08 AM
Harry really enjoyed your piece this morning.. Hope your day has been going great.. :) Wilma
Nutter Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 2:52 AM
You have penned an excellent piece my friend. Well done. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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