Lisa Ricci Poet Light Verse

The Unwritten Note

"the unwritten note"

not so far in the distant past standing face to face
you asked me if I wanted you to write me a note
it escapes me why I froze without a reply in place

wishing upon stars that moment happen once more
for you for me for us as a treasure to forever keep
words with meaning to make any heart or soul soar

when thinking of the unwritten note to this very day
how true it is the heartbeat and expression are lost
I often wonder so what the unwritten note had to say

a whisper never to be duplicated in the same flair
gone is that thought and feeling inside your mind
may we celebrate the moment that sparked this affair

SkyWatcher
08-18-22

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Anil Deo August 24, 2022 at 7:47 AM Lisa, Lisa, Lisa SHALOM SHALOM and Namasthe, Namasthe, Namasthe (also means: salutations to thy soul). Thanx for commenting on my poems (I don't take your time, hands, input lightly, NEVER DID, BRILLUANT SPURIT. IN JESUS'S NAME, LIVE & HEALING, amen) Lisa Ricci August 25, 2022 at 3:41 AM Well now Anil Anil Anil (smile). Thank you for returning to this entry once again. Never do I take that for granted. Truly. It has been a long hot summer for certain. Yes Shalom but yes Namaste too now and always (another smile). Love and Blessings through the cosmos...

Bill Baker August 23, 2022 at 8:01 AM Lovely thoughts about that which could have been but was lost to inexperience. A romantic poem witch touched my heart. I like the way you think, Lisa. Have a love filled day! Hugs, Bill Lisa Ricci August 23, 2022 at 11:23 AM Bill, you are a gem. Thank you once again. Yes, that missed moment of what could have been said. The missed moment of the thought. May all know of love. Have a great afternoon. Blessings always. I will return to your page shortly. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile)

Deb M August 23, 2022 at 5:09 AM Aww that unwritten note what would it have said? Love this Lisa….moments lost eh? Debx Lisa Ricci August 23, 2022 at 11:21 AM Top of the Afternoon to you Deb. Hi. Thank you very much. Yes, the missed moment of the thought and words. Thank you for understanding my entry. That means a lot. Have a wonderful afternoon. I will see you shortly on your page. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar August 20, 2022 at 11:02 PM Sometimes we feel elated with thoughts. But if we do not grab the moment. all is lost. Lisa Ricci August 23, 2022 at 3:42 AM Good Afternoon Victor. Hi. Thank you very much for visiting my page and for seeing this entry. Yes, we need to take the moment so it isn't lost. You are right. Just like poetry, that initial moment and thought are lost forever if we don't write it down because it will never be the same. Have a beautiful and peaceful afternoon and night. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)

Harry Horsman August 20, 2022 at 9:25 PM A deep and beautiful poetry, Lisa, your pen again brings us, the emotion of love...Harry Lisa Ricci August 23, 2022 at 3:31 AM Good Morning hh. Hi. Thank you very much. Truly. If the emotive element came through than that's a plus (smile). Have a wonderful day. May there be love for one and all. Blessings always.

Anil Deo August 18, 2022 at 9:27 PM Your artistic & beautiful recollections continue. Your faithfulness in many friendships says tomme, yourvpen will never run dry, orvfalsely. Shalom be shalom. Infintbtake your visits & comments lightly ( a million ThanX are not enough). Jesus heals (hands2) Lisa Ricci August 19, 2022 at 2:58 AM Hello Anil. Whatever your hour, thank you thank you. I respect your opinion and intake. Truly. Thank you also for the healing hands which is always a plus (smile). May this day and comment find you safe and well and with continued clean water for you and those around you. Love and Blessings now and always along with Shalom Shalom Shalom now and always (smile)...