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The Unsupervised Stop Sign

The traffic, always busy, Seemingly streams smoothly Slithering through unsupervised Synaptic stop signs, Thoughts colliding with ideas Arriving at synchronistic solutions Within the cranial carnival side show High fiving the flirtatious filaments Of belief’s flickering flames The carnage of conscience Waiting for the light to change.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/30/2023 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine, sharp write on our internal stop signs, many of which go unheeded when unsupervised by conscience. Superb use of alliteration throughout. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 10/29/2023 2:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/17/2023 7:57:00 PM
from what I see the lights have a mind of their own and like to tease. Like this one. makes one think about values. Keep them coming David in NZ Where Summer has announced its coming.
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Date: 10/9/2023 8:44:00 PM
Right on, my friend. Aren't we all just waiting for the light to change.
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Date: 10/9/2023 7:47:00 PM
Great on, John..
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Date: 10/9/2023 1:07:00 PM
I see what you've done. This is what happens when you go unsupervised. Gone rogue.
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Date: 10/9/2023 12:09:00 PM
A fun write. Good Luck... I also did this one. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 10/9/2023 11:46:00 AM
Never stop - I am giving you the green light lol!!! you are the master of alliteration John! love it:-) hugs Jan xx
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