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The Unsupervised Stop Sign

I've been standing here for four hours. My feet feel wobbly. My throat is dry, like hot carpet. I've been looking at the same horizon Making things up in my mind Of what I actually see. And I'm still holding this thing! After the first few hours it felt fine. Three hours later it's like a boat's anchor! I'm so ready for the next person to tap me out. I think he's late. This is excruciating. Oh, here he is, A blurry water painting coming towards me in the horizon. God I hope this is real. This STOP sign is killing me.

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Date: 10/6/2023 9:56:00 PM
Creative take on the prompt. Love this one. Especially that ending. So intriguing and left me wanting to know more! Profound! And how quickly you’ve written too
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Matt Caliri
Date: 10/6/2023 11:14:00 PM
Thank you! It just poured out of me. What's occurring to me now is that in my poem the STOP sign is never not supervised, though the FEAR of it being unsupervised is the real meat of the issue.

Book: Shattered Sighs