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The Ungathered Direction

See through time Reality unaligned Past disperses to Contaminate Torments with Clarity of fate

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Christina Bowring

Date: 10/14/2023 4:36:00 AM

A great, deep, thoughtful poem dear Dilly and the title is very intriguing. You have such a wonderful talent with your clever, poetic chosen words that are few and yet convey so much. Inspiring. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you for a lovely weekend. Xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/14/2023 1:30:00 PM

Thank you Christina, you kind words are well received x

Karen Jones

Date: 10/13/2023 11:10:00 PM

Deep penetrating.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/13/2023 11:43:00 PM

Thank you Karen :)