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I see her name upon the screen..... I think: > Can it be six months, > is that really how long it's been? She says: > comfort me as u once did > I need u now; I always did I think: > Was that when my life truly fell, > into a place that felt like hell? She says: > I'm sorry 4 what I did to u > u know I really didn't mean 2 I think: > God, I miss her, I miss her so > Is this a sign that I should follow? She says: > come to me, I need u here > u know that I still luv u deer I think: > I'm 6 months free of fear and doubt > Of a life of pain, inside and out She says: > u said u would be there for me > the time is now, please come to me I think: > I thought that I could rescue you > But that was never really true > > Your fate is up to God and you > There's nothing any man can do I say: > I loved you then and love you now > I tried the best, as I knew how > > I'll pray for you to find relief > But I have found a new belief > > I cannot save, I cannot solve > To this, I truly am resolved > She says: > .

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Date: 3/28/2015 4:48:00 PM
Wow...that's some write. I don't know what to think of it. You know best....This is Eileen, by the way...New name. Hugs
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David Brown
Date: 3/29/2015 4:15:00 PM
Hi Eileen, thank you as always for reading my work and sharing your new 'nom de plume'. Like all poetry, there is some truth, some fiction, some dark and some light; all depends on our point of view. Look forward to reading some of Jade's work! David
Date: 3/28/2015 4:36:00 PM
So nice to enjoy your verse this cold snowy afternoon, and wish I too could learn that lesson? Light & Love
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David Brown
Date: 3/29/2015 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Debbie. So nice to read your comment on a rainy afternoon! Hope the snow changes to sunshine for you soon. David

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