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The Twelve Days of Christmas In the Mountain West Subregion of the Western United States

On the first day of Christmas, my true love gave to me a starling on a juniper tree. On the second day of Christmas, my true love gave to me two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the third day of Christmas, my true love gave to me three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the fourth day of Christmas my true love gave to me four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the fifth day of Christmas my true love gave to me five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the sixth day of Christmas my true love gave to me six Mormons preaching, five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the seventh day of Christmas my true love gave to me seven bee hives buzzing, six Mormons preaching, five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the eighth day of Christmas my true love gave to me eight desert lizards, seven bee hives buzzing, six Mormons preaching, five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the ninth day of Christmas my true love gave to me nine sea gulls soaring, eight desert lizards, seven bee hives buzzing, six Mormons preaching, five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the tenth day of Christmas my true love gave to me ten big rig drivers, nine sea gulls soaring, eight desert lizards, seven bee hives buzzing, six Mormons preaching, five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the eleventh day of Christmas my true love gave to me eleven restaurant workers, ten big rig drivers, nine sea gulls soaring, eight desert lizards, seven bee hives buzzing, six Mormons preaching, five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree. On the twelfth day of Christmas my true love gave to me twelves nurse practitioners, eleven restaurant workers, ten big rig drivers, nine sea gulls soaring, eight desert lizards, seven bee hives buzzing, six Mormons preaching, five national parks, four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree.

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Date: 11/11/2023 3:47:00 AM
Ha ha ha, so glad to see this was a winner!
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Date: 11/10/2023 5:37:00 PM
Back with congratulations,Andrea!
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Date: 11/10/2023 2:15:00 AM
"Fifty pencil sharpens', smudge everywhere!" ~ A prosaic adjunct?
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Date: 11/10/2023 1:49:00 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2023 7:19:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem Andrea, thank you for entering the contest! Congratulations on your placement!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/9/2023 7:23:00 PM
Oh wow. Thank you very much
Date: 11/7/2023 4:53:00 AM
absolutly brillant poem, a wonderful creativity, waiting for Christmas in USA, such enjoyable reading, Andrea yann
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Date: 11/7/2023 4:52:00 AM
absolutly brillant poem, a wonderful creativity, waiting for Christmas in USA, such enjoyable reading, Andrea yann
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Date: 11/7/2023 1:20:00 AM
Hilarious, wonderful! On the thirteenth day of Christmas, all I wanted was rest. You are a marvelous writer. This will be my Christmas poem, with punch and mistletoe, warning anyone with license and vehicle~ to back off! Lol. Blessings.
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Date: 11/7/2023 12:48:00 AM
You are certainly in someone's good books, the year has certainly flown, can't believe it's next month. Tom
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Date: 11/6/2023 10:02:00 PM
Whoa you’ve done a very creative write for this one, i love the way you’ve made this flow too! “ four lumps of coal, three snowy slopes, two briny shrimp and a starling on a juniper tree” those lines stood out for me the most! Four lumps of coal! Thats new and very unique how you’ve paired words etc! I saw this place through your words, like souvenirs so beautiful! Goodluck in the contest. Always a pleasure reading your work
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Date: 11/6/2023 6:38:00 PM
Delightful! My favorite gift is the 'five national parks!' Whoa! Smiles, gw
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Date: 11/6/2023 3:49:00 PM
Andrea, well done, I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 11/6/2023 3:21:00 PM
a great take on the 12 Days of Christmas, Andrea. I learned about your part of the country in reading your poem. Your poem also made me smile. Well done...have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 11/6/2023 3:04:00 PM
You did well! I have lived in the South since 1990’s but my heart is so many other places…
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Date: 11/6/2023 2:03:00 PM
A creative/fun~write/new song. I enjoyed reading it. Good Luck... When do you cut the record??? Have a great/fun day..........
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Date: 11/6/2023 1:54:00 PM
ha! i enjoyed the examples you've chosen, andrea! well done!
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Date: 11/6/2023 11:41:00 AM
... I hardly breathed ... there was a lot to keep in order, Andrea ... really creatively written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/6/2023 11:33:00 AM
I am so enjoying reading these Christmas poems and learning about different places round the world:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2023 11:18:00 AM
Missed your storytelling! Great as always!!!
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