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The Truth of You

Do you ever just look in the mirror and not like what you see you get hopeless because you don’t think you are worthy enough because you compare yourself to other people that’s me everyday You see people in magazines and movie screens and you realize you will never look like that and how beautiful they are but are they really beautiful you can’t judge someone by their looks judge them by their actions Are you kind? Because that’s all that matters society makes us think low of ourselves they make us think that if you get surgery and cake your face with makeup you will be the ideal person but stop thinking about what others think because it’s not the cover of the book that matters It’s when you open the book and turn the pages.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/20/2017 8:19:00 AM
I really enjoy the idea behind this piece. The title caught my attention right away; not sure why, but it sounded sweet. To make this stronger, I'd suggest using a stronger vocabulary and make it not sound as if you're talking as much. It'll flow better that way. Love it though! :)
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