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The Trees Dance

Wind,
rising.
The trees dance
to whispered songs.
Swaying to and fro on this summer night.

The breeze freshens the air all around us.
Sweet smelling night.
Fragrant air
surrounds 
us.

Heat 
dispelled
on a breeze.
We sit and watch
trees that are dancing for our enjoyment.

Copyright © Francine Roberts | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 6/21/2011 1:01:00 PM Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : ) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/21/2011 10:06:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Francine. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/19/2011 5:57:00 PM Just lovely and a great wrap up at the end Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/19/2011 3:33:00 PM My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Francine Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 6/19/2011 12:10:00 PM A beautiful image of trees dancing, Congrats Francine on your brilliant win..love, gautami Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/19/2011 8:53:00 AM What a very refreshing tetractys this is, Francine, really great how you depict these dancing trees! Super congrats on your awesome win :D Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 6/19/2011 7:36:00 AM congrats on your fantastic win with this lovely piece. cory Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/19/2011 3:54:00 AM Francine, congratulations on your win in Chris' contest, I loved this one the minute I read it :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/19/2011 12:06:00 AM Congratulations Francine on your 2nd place Win.Beautiful poem. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/18/2011 9:58:00 PM AHA , I had just seen this one too. Congratulations, Francine, a well deserved win!! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/18/2011 9:52:00 PM congrats francine on you happy win ! :) huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/18/2011 6:08:00 PM I really like this one,Francine. It's so cool to see the trees dance! Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 6/18/2011 4:30:00 PM When tree's do dance no sweet romance, upon the withered bough, and love is sweet, dumb humans meet, but trees don't get the chance, love, Don Johnson Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/16/2011 7:35:00 PM Beautiful Francine, best of luck with this poem and I want to thank you so very much for my placement in your Sonnet Contest, I am so honored, I enjoyed writing my poem for you and it turned out very meaningful for me, we never know what dwells within us until we pick up that pen and begin~~ Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 6/16/2011 6:26:00 PM this was awesome I love it! cory Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 6/16/2011 6:25:00 PM this was awesome I love it! cory Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/16/2011 9:59:00 AM A real beauty Francine, can feel the serenity in this write of yours... Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 6/15/2011 1:15:00 AM Serene and very beautiful! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/14/2011 9:36:00 AM Beautiful tetractys, Francine. Watching the trees "dance" in the wind is so enjoyable. I see you have another tetractys and will check that one out as well. I think this one would be hard to top. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 6/14/2011 7:56:00 AM Lovely, I feel as if I were sitting beneath the trees, and watching the show!! Good luck, Francine!! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/14/2011 7:33:00 AM Brilliant perspective on breeze, Good luck, Francine Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/14/2011 12:10:00 AM you just made me sway, francine... love this winning material! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/13/2011 9:44:00 PM Wow, a winner for sure..lovely. BG Login to Reply