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The Trees Dance

Wind, rising. The trees dance to whispered songs. Swaying to and fro on this summer night. The breeze freshens the air all around us. Sweet smelling night. Fragrant air surrounds us. Heat dispelled on a breeze. We sit and watch trees that are dancing for our enjoyment.

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/21/2011 1:01:00 PM

Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you for all your recent wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2011 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/19/2011 5:57:00 PM

Just lovely and a great wrap up at the end Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2011 3:33:00 PM

My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Francine

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/19/2011 12:10:00 PM

A beautiful image of trees dancing, Congrats Francine on your brilliant win..love, gautami

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/19/2011 8:53:00 AM

What a very refreshing tetractys this is, Francine, really great how you depict these dancing trees! Super congrats on your awesome win :D

Cory Long

Date: 6/19/2011 7:36:00 AM

congrats on your fantastic win with this lovely piece. cory

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/19/2011 3:54:00 AM

Francine, congratulations on your win in Chris' contest, I loved this one the minute I read it :)

Kash Poet

Date: 6/19/2011 12:06:00 AM

Congratulations Francine on your 2nd place Win.Beautiful poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2011 9:58:00 PM

AHA , I had just seen this one too. Congratulations, Francine, a well deserved win!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2011 9:52:00 PM

congrats francine on you happy win ! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2011 6:08:00 PM

I really like this one,Francine. It's so cool to see the trees dance!

Don Johnson

Date: 6/18/2011 4:30:00 PM

When tree's do dance no sweet romance, upon the withered bough, and love is sweet, dumb humans meet, but trees don't get the chance, love, Don Johnson

Constance La France

Date: 6/16/2011 7:35:00 PM

Beautiful Francine, best of luck with this poem and I want to thank you so very much for my placement in your Sonnet Contest, I am so honored, I enjoyed writing my poem for you and it turned out very meaningful for me, we never know what dwells within us until we pick up that pen and begin~~

Cory Long

Date: 6/16/2011 6:26:00 PM

this was awesome I love it! cory

Cory Long

Date: 6/16/2011 6:25:00 PM

this was awesome I love it! cory

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/16/2011 9:59:00 AM

A real beauty Francine, can feel the serenity in this write of yours...

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/15/2011 1:15:00 AM

Serene and very beautiful!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/14/2011 9:36:00 AM

Beautiful tetractys, Francine. Watching the trees "dance" in the wind is so enjoyable. I see you have another tetractys and will check that one out as well. I think this one would be hard to top. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/14/2011 7:56:00 AM

Lovely, I feel as if I were sitting beneath the trees, and watching the show!! Good luck, Francine!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/14/2011 7:33:00 AM

Brilliant perspective on breeze, Good luck, Francine

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2011 12:10:00 AM

you just made me sway, francine... love this winning material! :) huggs, nette

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/13/2011 9:44:00 PM

Wow, a winner for sure..lovely. BG