The Trees

the trees are in blossom - - i sneeze For Tracie’s Spring contest

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/7/2012 3:03:00 PM

ohhh Tracies contest...I will go see what she wants..I remember we want to get you away from cause & effect!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/7/2012 3:06:00 PM

contest over? well you were not impressed by what you saw Jack it wasn't a haiku moment so it's hard to make a good haiku out of it aye?

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/6/2012 6:24:00 PM

Jack, congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:49:00 PM

JACK, congratulations with your xool poem in Tracie's "SPRING" contest.. always :-) PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Spring Is In The Air" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/3/2012 11:15:00 AM

ACHOOO! made me smile. .Congrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/3/2012 2:38:00 AM

Ha ha trust you congrats Jack love it xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/30/2012 6:40:00 AM

curse that hay fever jack, soon be winter, oh dear, got that wrong, i'm still waiting for summer. enjoyed your haiku.

Kathryn Collins

Date: 8/26/2012 8:48:00 AM

ah choo!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/25/2012 11:15:00 AM

ha ha .. gotcha Jack.. super fun read.. good luck luv.. ah choo.. sorry..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2012 8:50:00 PM

hahaha, talk about an easy way to do the contest, and yet it is charming as can be.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2012 4:35:00 PM

Bravo....very good haiku Jack - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/24/2012 3:35:00 PM

LOL yup yup..now I only have one thought to give you..must not do cause and effect for the 3rd line is supposed to be a wee additional surprise! Light & Love

Cory Long

Date: 8/24/2012 3:20:00 PM

nicely done.. simple and to the point.. I liked it. good luck in the contest.. have a great day cory

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/24/2012 3:08:00 PM

I'm with Arild on this one, I do sneeze a lot in the Spring...those darn trees are the culprits most of the time too! They are beautiful thought, I do have to say! Your write is truly phenomenal my friend, I loved reading it tonight! Great Work!!