The Tree In My Yard

in my yard stands a tree
lone like a hermit, regal like a monarch
its roots dug deep
its branches touching the heavens
peeking behind the skies veil
sometimes its leaves rustle
overall it is silent and still
still.................... 
like waters without ripples

it stands upright
brooding over the saga of struggle
from a sapling to a towering giant
indeed a tryst with destiny!

under the summer sky
braving the smarting beams
it remained uncomplaining
below the thundering clouds
bearing a thousand needle pricks
it stayed nonchalant.

when the wind swept across
bending its branches in all directions
it stood on firm feet unwavering

it tells a tale of struggle and survival
it had stood there before I was born
now it displays every scar and every stripe
on its knotted bark as a proud trophy

sometimes I feel its pain
when wet and dripping in pouring rain
or scorched in the sun’s fiery rage
yet it holds an umbrella over all
who come to it in sun and rain

Placed First 
A Brian Strand 1098 Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Brian strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Ray Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 12:58 PM
great capture of nature's gift the tree. i love nature poems where one becomes a gift of senses and strolls thru the magnificence of all that surrounds us and this poem pays such great homage to our trees....a tribute to Romanticism where emotion and inspiration run amok in ataraxia...thank you
Ashley Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Dear Valsa, I am enraptured by the persuasive power of your amazing poem. A metaphorical beauty of life, struggle and survival, acceptance and consolation, empathy and appreciation. Your tree, “lone like a hermit, regal like a monarch” is magnificent, as is your mighty pen! Your last two lines are a grand finale to an exquisite piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Goff Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 6:14 AM
Gosh Valsa, is your tree single? Love it! Fell deep into this sparkling gem dear friend! to mine faves, jamesy
Alex Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 1:10 AM
Tree, the great gift. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Baker Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 4:57 PM
A magician with imagery, you are. Valsa. But best of all is the reaving of a heart and soul that has empathy for all of God's creation. An honor to know you and share poetry with you. Bill
Proxenos Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 11:26 AM
How Beautifully you write my dear friend - a tree standing with its branches outstretched, embracing all weathers, consoling all, with the true might of the depth of its roots, with its graciousness and its tenacity and ferociousness to live, to endure and to survive. Intense poetry, wow, a gem of a poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Deo Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 10:48 PM
Wow Sis Valsa. I lived line 2. Then the next stanza. Now all of it, because YOU KNOW MY DEAREST FRIENDS, uncomplaining-giving trees! Hallelujah
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 4:16 PM
Valsa, As majestic as a tree, your poem is. After standing their ground for an extended period of time, they are acknowledged as a household member. It was a joy to read.
Brul Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 9:26 PM
Very evocative! Reminds me of the old willow tree beside the brooks of my hometown.
Wolf Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 8:46 PM
Truly heroic, the tree, as you've rightly depicted her, Valsa. :) Gershon
One Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 2:07 PM
I wrote a poem called melancholic tree and this poem reminds me a little about my melancholic tree.. i like your use of metaphor in your poem.. a deep emotive write..
Buhagiar Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 3:53 AM
What better subject than a beautiful tree. We are trying to increase the number of trees in Malta. But our people are vandals and steal anything that comes under their hands. Glad you have such a beautiful one.
Horsman Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 10:40 PM
One thing i am sure of, Valsa, Your tree is loved, when with beautiful poetry you dedicate to it's very, existence.
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 2:24 PM
A poem lovely as a tree. They become part of the family after standing tall for so long. Much enjoyed.
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Valsa enjoyed the poem. I had a maple tree in my back that over 70 years old lost some of its branches in my back yard. Blessings ~ Debra
Leffanta Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 11:26 AM
My daughter has a towering oak in her yard - constant concern to me since it could easily topple over during the drought/high wind/earthquake, etc . . . .
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Lovely tribute to the tree in your yard Valsa, bet it could tell many stories. Tom
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