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The Tree In My Yard

in my yard stands a tree lone like a hermit, regal like a monarch its roots dug deep its branches touching the heavens peeking behind the skies veil sometimes its leaves rustle overall it is silent and still still.................... like waters without ripples it stands upright brooding over the saga of struggle from a sapling to a towering giant indeed a tryst with destiny! under the summer sky braving the smarting beams it remained uncomplaining below the thundering clouds bearing a thousand needle pricks it stayed nonchalant when the wind swept across bending its branches in all directions it stood on firm feet unwavering it tells a tale of struggle and survival it had stood there before I was born now it displays every scar and every stripe on its knotted bark as a proud trophy sometimes I feel its pain when wet and dripping in pouring rain or scorched in the sun’s fiery rage yet it holds an umbrella over all who come to it in sun and rain Placed First A Brian Strand 1098 Poetry Contest Sponsor - Brian strand

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Date: 4/6/2022 12:58:00 PM
great capture of nature's gift the tree. i love nature poems where one becomes a gift of senses and strolls thru the magnificence of all that surrounds us and this poem pays such great homage to our trees....a tribute to Romanticism where emotion and inspiration run amok in ataraxia...thank you
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Date: 3/31/2022 7:25:00 PM
Dear Valsa, I am enraptured by the persuasive power of your amazing poem. A metaphorical beauty of life, struggle and survival, acceptance and consolation, empathy and appreciation. Your tree, “lone like a hermit, regal like a monarch” is magnificent, as is your mighty pen! Your last two lines are a grand finale to an exquisite piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/30/2022 6:14:00 AM
Gosh Valsa, is your tree single? Love it! Fell deep into this sparkling gem dear friend! to mine faves, jamesy
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Date: 3/30/2022 1:10:00 AM
Tree, the great gift. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/28/2022 4:57:00 PM
A magician with imagery, you are. Valsa. But best of all is the reaving of a heart and soul that has empathy for all of God's creation. An honor to know you and share poetry with you. Bill
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Date: 3/28/2022 11:26:00 AM
How Beautifully you write my dear friend - a tree standing with its branches outstretched, embracing all weathers, consoling all, with the true might of the depth of its roots, with its graciousness and its tenacity and ferociousness to live, to endure and to survive. Intense poetry, wow, a gem of a poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/27/2022 10:48:00 PM
Wow Sis Valsa. I lived line 2. Then the next stanza. Now all of it, because YOU KNOW MY DEAREST FRIENDS, uncomplaining-giving trees! Hallelujah
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Date: 3/24/2022 4:16:00 PM
Valsa, As majestic as a tree, your poem is. After standing their ground for an extended period of time, they are acknowledged as a household member. It was a joy to read.
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Date: 3/23/2022 9:26:00 PM
Very evocative! Reminds me of the old willow tree beside the brooks of my hometown.
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Date: 3/23/2022 8:46:00 PM
Truly heroic, the tree, as you've rightly depicted her, Valsa. :) Gershon
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Date: 3/23/2022 2:07:00 PM
I wrote a poem called melancholic tree and this poem reminds me a little about my melancholic tree.. i like your use of metaphor in your poem.. a deep emotive write..
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Date: 3/23/2022 3:53:00 AM
What better subject than a beautiful tree. We are trying to increase the number of trees in Malta. But our people are vandals and steal anything that comes under their hands. Glad you have such a beautiful one.
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Date: 3/22/2022 10:40:00 PM
One thing i am sure of, Valsa, Your tree is loved, when with beautiful poetry you dedicate to it's very, existence.
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Date: 3/22/2022 2:24:00 PM
A poem lovely as a tree. They become part of the family after standing tall for so long. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 3/22/2022 12:49:00 PM
Valsa enjoyed the poem. I had a maple tree in my back that over 70 years old lost some of its branches in my back yard. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/22/2022 11:26:00 AM
My daughter has a towering oak in her yard - constant concern to me since it could easily topple over during the drought/high wind/earthquake, etc . . . .
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Date: 3/22/2022 10:33:00 AM
Lovely tribute to the tree in your yard Valsa, bet it could tell many stories. Tom
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