The Tower

It was covered by a blanket of moss

with a wood fence that looked as sturdy as 

a young child’s craft project, stretching across

a patio, the memory of jazz.



It had a tower on the balcony,

reaching towards the moon in the midnight sky.

A witches’ tower made with alchemy

in which a kidnapped girl, hostage, would cry.



It has a fierce lean, rivaling that of 

the famous Piza ruin, so extreme

it looks it will fall if you give a shove.

The castle, the image, must be a dream.



An old green forest, decaying behind

the stone castle, which I’m sure you can find.
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January 24, 2024 at 11:10 PM
I can clearly visualize this crumbling old castle with a tower reaching up to the sky in the backdrop of a withering forest. I can also hear the kidnapped girl's painful moans ! A sonnet evoking the memories of an old folklore....! Thanks Layla for your visit to my page !
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