The Tiny Traveler

Adopted animals love their humans; 
show it in many ways.  
The tiniest pet, 
revels in the harmony of its time, 
with family.

Dinky was a special hamster; 
she lived a year beyond the normal life span.  
I carried her around in my pocket and she loved the ride.  
Her head, peeking out, evoked curious comments 
from all who glimpsed her.

She searched for me, when I was at school; 
her knack for escaping the cage, 
kept me searching for her in the afternoons.  
I often found her, in my chest of drawers.

Of course, I found it odd, 
but hamsters are four-legged, Houdini’s…
Dinky was the best.

One cold winter night, as I lay in slumber, 
That tiny traveler made her way from,
one end of the house, to my bedroom.
I lay there, on that frosty eve,
dreaming that I was outside in the rain; 
the chilling raindrops, dancing upon my arm.

In a moment of lucidity, 
Reality hit; those raindrops were tiny paws!  
I reached, grasped and in the shimmering moonlit rays, 
I stared into the eyes of my new bed buddy.  
A twitchy nose said it all…
”I found you!”
I moved her cage close by my bedside;
future escapes faded into history.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/28/2017 7:12:00 PM
You mean dreaming, not reaming. :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/29/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Bill; this sort of feedback is very helpful.
Date: 5/25/2015 9:32:00 AM
ML , I came back to read this great poem again, it is just so full of love 7
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/26/2015 9:34:00 AM
Wow, thanks so much, Broken Wings. I am so glad that you enjoyed it.
Date: 4/24/2015 9:15:00 AM
wow, this story is AMAZING. I just love it. I'm gonna fave this one!!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/24/2015 11:37:00 PM
Thank you, it is true and I adored that little, twitchy-nosed critter. She had to be wherever I was. Thanks for the "fav" and I'm glad you stopped by.
Date: 4/24/2015 2:49:00 AM
Love this charmer, so warm and enriching. Pets are family and sometimes the best family we have.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/24/2015 7:45:00 AM
Yes, I agree; Dinky followed me around, as if we were glued together. I started carrying her in my jacket pocket when she was a tiny thing and I'd come home from school every day to find her cage empty and I'd have to begin a search...many times I found her in my chest-of-drawers.
Date: 4/23/2015 8:16:00 AM
ML,hamster are really cute.. :)!!! and so this poem of yours flow is good and weeeee sweet!//olive eloisa
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/23/2015 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Olive.
Date: 4/21/2015 9:24:00 PM
Awesome. Great to read about Dinky, your pet four legged Houdini hamster. Loved this.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/21/2015 11:41:00 PM
A true story; I've had some great pet, in my lifetime. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 4/21/2015 4:35:00 PM
ML, this poem is delightful and enchanting, I had a hamster as a child also and she always got out of her cage, I guess they must be smart, lovely poem, 7 ( check your second verse s/b pocket) and thanks for visiting my poem, Stars and Scars
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/21/2015 11:43:00 PM
Ooh, thanks so much. Aren't they wonderful little critters?
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