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The Tinsel Tree

"It's a fake tree", I said the year my mother lost her mind and decided that real trees were too much trouble! My best friend, who lived next door thought it was just great,....that giant, silver monstrosity! That is..until I told her to close her eyes, and sniff. "That's the ugliest tree I ever smelled!" she said, ...finally agreeing with me. Her support helped to convince my mother of her error in judgment, and that was the last tinsel tree we ever had. That was the same year that we noticed that Santa Claus looked a lot like our neighbor, Mr. Hendrickson. We had called him "Mr. Hiccupson" until we would go into fits of giggles watching how his belly jiggled. Spending all those Christmas's apart after her family moved away, was painful Never again would we have special sleepovers, and times like singing around that fake tree, and listening for Mr. Hendrickson's reindeer to land on the roof. We had written letters for awhile, but after a few years we drifted apart....her living on one coast, me on the other. But I had never forgotten that last Christmas....and the silver tinsel tree. Out of the blue...a phone call,...a voice that time hadn't forgotten. Suddenly, we were laughing and giggling like two little girls once again. Sometimes, when you least expect it, Christmas shows up early,....like a long lost friend and wraps you up in it's arms. Thank you Santa Claus.....or Mr. Hiccupson, ......wherever you are!.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/29/2015 10:48:00 PM
Very enjoyable, Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:18:00 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2015 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations! Lovely story!
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Date: 12/28/2015 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie
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Date: 12/13/2014 2:21:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your nice win! I really enjoyed the story and the way you narrated it. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/11/2014 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great poem Carrie.
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Date: 12/10/2014 10:41:00 AM
This sounds so detailed, it must be from life! Very amusing! Congratulations! (BTW, they sell a spray-on tree scent for the fakers, which we have been for the past 5-8 years. I like balsam fir.)
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:58:00 PM
a wonderful story many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:35:00 PM
CARRIE, :) Congrats, in the "Santa Claus" contest! Sweet winning poem. laterz ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/4/2014 7:00:00 AM
- Santa Claus, contest - sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi is drawn and Christmas is over - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, CARRIE! - Now Santa Claus needs to take a well-deserved vacation :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2014 5:29:00 AM
Hiya and congratulations Carrie love xx
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Date: 1/3/2014 7:48:00 PM
This is destined to be a classic! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/3/2014 4:26:00 PM
Wow it's YOU, you know I can never tell it's you. Congrad's Carrie what a treasure you wrote. Light & Love
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Date: 12/11/2009 12:33:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement today to my endeavours Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/11/2009 12:04:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/9/2009 3:29:00 PM
A really beautiful story. You brought us right there with you, smiles and all. Thank you Carrie. Robert
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Date: 12/9/2009 1:35:00 PM
Love it. Thinking of past Christmases gives a sickness of the soul, for the loss, don't you see. Yours is a good revival. Love, daver
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Date: 12/9/2009 8:26:00 AM
I recall one year we had a tinsel tree, and yes, they sure are ugly. Your poem is so lovely with warm thoughts of friendship and christmas memories, I just love it and thanks so much for your comment on my poem Snowflakes(like kisses)
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Date: 12/9/2009 12:50:00 AM
Always good ro re-read a poet with style Carrie May your gifts multiply in new directions in 2010 Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts .Excellent blog,may it be.
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Date: 12/8/2009 8:20:00 PM
Beautiful Carrie, it is amazing how true friendship can stand the test of miles and time, especially during the holidays. I remember being a "giggling girly" it was fun. Thank you for the reminder. Smiles and giggles (Mr. Pot-Bellied Stove... LOL) from Lolita
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:56:00 PM
I saw your title post Carrie, and had to see what it was about. This is so true of children growing up. Was so hilarious, the part, part when you noticed that Santa looked a lot like Mr. Hendrickson.Haa! Good Job, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:54:00 PM
Know that feeling ... there is something special about relationships, sort of magnets always for Christmas. Beautiful.
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:42:00 PM
Wonderful poem Carrie...love it...Marty
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Date: 12/8/2009 6:40:00 PM
Hi Carrie hope you are doing well!..........you speak of a great holiday and special friendships...... well worth the repost
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