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The Time Traveler - a Visual Art Poem - POTD

POTD 6th Sept 2019
When the dawn kisses the dew on all thing that grow and that first melancholy thought, ponderous and low questions any relevant notions to how Time flows shattering dreams and purpose as onward it goes ~ Explain the unexplained ~ Scientific theories he questions difficult to comprehend that Time is without beginning ~ Time has no end To assume Time travel to the past is absurd Is to mock quantum physics so wonderfully weird Once ‘neath a starry sky a frozen memory in Time When vows were exchanged in a moment sublime In blatant disregard Time stole what was not IT’S to keep Tears soothe not a broken heart and regrets bed deep To take back what was his surely would not be a crime? If he could but turn back the Hands of time ~ Explain the unexplained ~ The limits to human perception to many are obscure Though thought becomes lucid in the absence of fear Belief belies science for this Traveler of might Impervious to erratic judgement and misguided sight Whispered words he hears in the drum’s haunting beat ‘Courage Traveler ~ forge your heart in the furnace of heat integrated with energy ~ enigma of time travel so fleet ‘Carpe Diem’ lest Time pass’ introeo no retreat’ Time waits for no man with The Portal it casts Dexterity and skill required so the Traveler moves fast The leap between Present and Beyond mere seconds to last On to a crystalline galaxy where Time is steadfast ~ Explain the unexplained ~ Encapsulated in Love ~ Time is ever last
Synopsis
I was asked if the young bride died. No - she did not die, but was merely caught up in time as it sped away with her, leaving behind her devastated husband. Refusing to give up his search for her, he set about trying to figure out the complexities of space and time. Conquering his fear threshold, he ‘jumps’ into the ‘timeless gap’ to be with her. According to the theory of relativity, the space and time continuum are not what they appear. Being relative, they do not always function in a similar fashion and are not experienced in the same way every time. Time does stand still when we are in pure admiration, in awe, in wonder and in adoration, where the purest form of love exists. It is in these moments we experience a different galaxy where indeed time does stand still. Like Eternity ~ One moment is like A thousand years and A thousand years is like one moment.
By Maria Williams
Video arrangement, production, direction, sound mixing and compilation: Ron Williams Video editing, graphics, compilation Jayne Hartanto Narrated by Tiffany C Like Share Subscribe Thank you Copyright © Sept 2019 Maria Williams
POTD 6th Sept 2019

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Date: 3/7/2024 7:39:00 AM
(late to the party) but Maria - absolutely LOVE this xx Beautifully read and the video imagery is quite phenomenal - Sam x
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Date: 3/3/2024 4:21:00 AM
Dear Maria, your poem is a profound and wonderful journey through time and love. You intricately explore the human experience and the enigma of time as it captivates the soul. Your words artistically delve into the depths of emotion and perception, leaving a lasting imprint on the heart. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking piece and for the recommendation. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 12/23/2019 1:38:00 PM
This kaleidoscopic tapestry of Time is a poetic vision of beauty, Maria! Kudos on POTD. Love and happy holidays.
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Date: 10/22/2019 7:32:00 PM
Wow... this is great! I wish one day we seat face to face and talk about this...
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Date: 9/9/2019 9:18:00 AM
Simply amazing! I Am in Awe, so deserving of POTD. Thanks for sharing your art with us. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 9/9/2019 10:18:00 PM
Thank you Rick, so glad that you liked it. Thanks for the support .....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/7/2019 6:33:00 PM
Maria, Irrespective of space and time continuum I believe time travel is possible. Our technology has not caught up with the past yet. This poem is one of your best ever Maria! My kudos to your entire team with this production that a movie script could easily evolve from. Outstanding work from all concerned! I loved the narrator's voice as well. Congratulations on this magnificent poem! Poem and video are very deserving of your POTD honors! Congratulations my friend. Simply exquisite! xxoo
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Date: 9/8/2019 5:45:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie, we are very much on the same wave length here I feel. Thank you so much, and I am thrilled you liked it so much. Take care, I really appreciate your visit....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/7/2019 12:44:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved POTD
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Date: 9/8/2019 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate your visit....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 11:15:00 PM
an amazing write...congrats on your POTD
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Date: 9/8/2019 5:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanne, I appreciate your visit....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 6:58:00 PM
Dear Maria, you deserve so much more than my simple thoughts. I am in complete awe. Speechless and breathless, all at the same time. I feel so blessed just being in your presence. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day! ~ Brandy
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Date: 9/7/2019 6:29:00 AM
Oh Brandy, I am in awe of your poetry my dear. I am humbled by your kind words, I do not deserve the high esteem you hold me in, you are most kind sweet poetess, thank you....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 6:29:00 PM
Wait a minute. I need to catch my breath after reading this magnificent poem. Your talent is amazing, Maria. Congratulations on POTD. All the best~ Warren
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Date: 9/8/2019 5:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Warren, I hope you've caught your breath by now? Thank you for your visit, I'm so glad you liked it ....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 1:53:00 PM
What can I really say? This is literally the best thing I have seen on poetrysoup and when I say "the best", this is extremely what I meant by it, I thanks you for sending a message in order to read it, otherwise believe I would have clearly missed a opportunities to see this beauty video, "explain the unexplained" everything about it was performed and especially the person reciting it, believe me I have a become a huge fan of than girl's (Perhaps women) voice, I really enjoyed it
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Date: 9/8/2019 5:58:00 AM
That girl is a very talented young English actress, and yes I agree she did an amazing job. Thank you for the high praise Faraz, I'm so glad you liked it, thought you would , seeing some of the posts you put on, I know you're into this stuff. Thanks once again....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 1:32:00 PM
An awesome team effort made for an enjoyable experience, my compliments on your POTD ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 9/8/2019 5:53:00 AM
Thank you William , appreciate the visit and comment....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on potd Maria..
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Date: 9/8/2019 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Si, appreciate the return visit ....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 10:45:00 AM
really enjoyed this Maria, congrats on POTD, ty for sharing :o) x
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:40:00 AM
Thank you Tracy, so glad you did. I appreciate your visit....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 9:41:00 AM
There was no doubt that this one should be POTD, or any other honor! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Sunlite, I am honored by your return visit and support my dear. Truly appreciated. Take care....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 8:54:00 AM
Congrats!! dear Maria...very proud of the Aussie Team...all the best to you and Ronnie...(((POTD!)))...yahoooo!!!...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:44:00 AM
It is rather grand and exciting isn't it? Taking poetry to a different level, and having a blast. Thanks John. You know I appreciate you and all the support you give....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 8:40:00 AM
You do great visual art poems Maria...Beautifully read..Congrats on POTD..
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I'm so glad that you liked it my friend. Thanks for the visit....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 6:51:00 AM
Back with congrats Maria on poem of the day..so well done!
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit my dear friend Vijay. I appreciate you always and am deeply grateful for the support....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 5:59:00 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS ! -
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:49:00 AM
Thanks for the return visit Anne-Lise, I truly appreciate it my dear friend....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 1:53:00 AM
Back with congratulations Maria on POTD honours, well deserved. Tom
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:51:00 AM
Thanks for the return visit Tom, you know I truly appreciate your support my friend....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/6/2019 1:23:00 AM
Expecting this and more! A work of Art that fills the senses truly deserves to be highly admired and rated.. Congratulations dearest Maria on the honour of POTD.. a recognition well earned.. Always looking forward to reading the finest of your inspiring poetry .. My warmest wishes and regards. God bless you. Love and hugs.
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:55:00 AM
Wow thank you my dear sweet poetic sister Besma. you know I truly appreciate your visit and support. Words can never be enough to tell you how much, your shining light, your beautiful comments are truly valued. Thank you so much and God Bless....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/5/2019 6:13:00 PM
A thoughtful, beautiful poem both verbally and visually, Maria. Love it.
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Carole, I am so glad that you liked it so much my friend.....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/5/2019 4:23:00 PM
Lucky is your ardent reader as they are reading up to you, dearest Maria! With each work of Art you are soaring high with your enlightening poetry! I highly cherish your outshining gem in my fave list! And with a huge WOW! I salute you.. my warmest wishes and regards. Blessings.. Love and hugs.
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Date: 9/8/2019 7:06:00 AM
Lucky is the poet or poetess who is graced by your visit my dear sweet poetic sister Besma. Your comments grace our pages, your analysis highlights and puts into perspective some of the facts I've struggled with to portray. You really get it, a true art, a truly enlightened Soul. Thank you from the bottom of my heart....Maria Hugs
Date: 9/5/2019 4:16:00 PM
Time, that enigma! Who dares "explain the unexplained"! but great minds.. deep hearts.. receptive souls.. Far from "scientific theories", every seeker of light and truth.. every daring spirit whose heart is full to the brim with Love and quite empty from fright would capture the essence of time according to a particular feel and an ever changing state of heart and mind.. Who dares soar high and touch space and galaxies but a poetess of grandeur.. a traveler in the mysteries of the existence..
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Date: 9/5/2019 2:00:00 PM
- Extraordinarily beautiful ... wordless and proud of you, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I am so grateful for all the support and kindness you have shown me. Truly appreciated my friend....Maria Hugs
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