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You said my eyes tell my story That they lead right to my heart You believed we had a purpose The time of us came from the stars My how we would laugh for hours All those stories you could tell You wanted to know all about me And never forgot one detail The day your life ended My whole world was torn apart You were forced on a new journey Leaving me with a broken heart Did you know how much I love you Did you know how much I care Did you know you are always in my heart The time of us so special and rare I pray your spirit has found peace I feel you are watching from above I look for signs that you are with me I am blessed to have known your love Written 12-1-15 Love Poem Contest By Heidi Sands Fifth Place

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Paul Murray

Date: 10/30/2020 12:04:00 PM

Lovely poem that wrenches down tears to fall gracefully below

Roy Pett

Date: 4/20/2018 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Susan with your beautifully written poem, certainly evoked sad memories, well written my friend. :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/22/2018 12:08:00 PM

Thanks Roy.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/11/2018 11:54:00 PM

A lovely heartfelt poem, Susan. Awesome and congrats on your well deserved win.

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/15/2018 3:19:00 AM

Thank you Line. You are so kind.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/7/2018 10:43:00 AM

Dear Sandra, I enjoyed reading this touching, romantic piece that had the power to tug at my heart! Beautiful, flowing quatrain! Congratulations on your win, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/8/2018 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much. You are so kind.

Joseph May

Date: 4/5/2018 1:52:00 PM

Beautiful write yet sad...Congrats on your win Susan

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/7/2018 1:03:00 AM

Thank you so much! Yes, wasn't an easy time or write.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/5/2018 9:13:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest. This poem reached me deeply. Congratulations for your win, Susan :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/7/2018 1:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Heidi!! Am thrilled you liked this and honored for the placement!

Matt Mcqueeney

Date: 1/14/2016 5:41:00 AM

Beautiful...nice write

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/15/2016 3:58:00 AM

Thank you matt! Very kind.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/3/2015 1:37:00 AM

Susan this was heartfelt and touching. I lost my best friend on my birthday in an auto accident. I wish I could go back in time. I still have his voice recording on my phone. If he would have come to my wedding he would have avoided the tragedy. The call was him telling me he could not make the wedding and he was terribly sorry. I had moved and lived six hours away. He bought a new exotic sports car and was racing at 200 miles an hour and the vehicle hydroplaned and he crashed.

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/5/2015 12:25:00 AM

I'm so sorry for your loss. Some people we just expect will always be... then suddenly permanently they're gone. I try to concentrate on good memories and I've good ones like I'm sure you do. Take care, hugs...

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/2/2015 10:13:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this very sad poem. I've lived it a few times myself, long ago. A7

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/3/2015 12:42:00 AM

Thank you Robert for reading and comments. Take care...

Mama Bear

Date: 12/2/2015 6:41:00 PM

We always seem to lose the ones that mean the most to us. Sometimes we do not realize how much they meant till it is too late. Always tell the ones you love that you love them. Well done and thanks for sharing Blessings Edith

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/2/2015 6:59:00 PM

Thank you... that is so true. Hugs...