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The Tightrope

As silent tears fall she’s alone. And trying to find answers. Is there any hope left? Is there a reason behind the pain? The hate, the hurt, the fear? Yet the only answer she receives is the bitter silence she deems as meaning hopeless. And she believes it. Helpless. Hopeless. Worthless. Useless. She believes it all. That the light she sees at the end of the tunnel is only but a fire left by others such as she. That its only shortly when the flames burn out and again its dark and cold leaving nothing but disappointment. She’ll continue walking, walking the tightrope. And if she falls? Its over, she’ll be gone. That maybe, things might be better once she finally falls. And she believes it all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/25/2013 11:10:00 AM
GAbbi, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/15/2013 1:39:00 PM
This is a very thought-provoking piece. Though, I wonder, can self-worth and ones own perspective on what's in front of them, suddenly turn the tightrope into an open road? I think, essentially, that's the way one can walk away from the darkness. Excellent writing!
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