The Thrill Is Gone

Used to run outside bundled up for winter.
Pulled my sled through snow to the hill where other
children slid with glee and our young hearts pounding.
Thrill of December.

Used to swing for hours in my day-time dreaming.
Played my records thinking of my Prince Charming.
Sang my love aloud in the woods to no one.
Thrill of my teen years.

Used to bike to town with my friends or sisters.
Ran and swam and walked to the park for snow cones.
Sports I played all day till the sun was setting.
Thrill of my summers.

Gone are firefly nights and my firework summers.
Thrills of childhood no longer hold enticement.
How I even dreamed while awake I wonder . . .
now that I’m older.

July 12, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Andrea. That's the thing I love the most about your poems. They find their way right into the hearts of readers :)
Horne Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:40 AM
lovely nostalgic write
Hamilton Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 1:18 PM
A nice write Andrea, and so true to life, the thrill is gone as we age, we do however find pleasure in other things now! Congrats on a top win!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Where was I, besides the recent SILENCE, my compliments on your deserving 1st Place and POTD--doubly so! Hooray, Andrea, perpetual praise truly -- Aloha~@William
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 3:37 PM
thanks , William!! I need to visit your winning poem as well.
Inman Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 5:43 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm with you, roll back the years by 20 or 25, that would do nicely.
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 4:37 PM
My original comment when you got potd has vanished .. many congrats on your win too:-) hugs Jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 10:27 AM
What an excellent poem, Andrea:-) No wonder this won you a well-deserved POTD! Congratulations on your first place win in my contest!
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 3:37 PM
thanks so much for the inspiration. That form is NOT easy!!! but the theme is very dear to me.
Michael Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Is it really gone or a little harder to reach...Congratulations Andrea on POTD
Brul Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 6:56 PM
Wow, BIG CONGRATS dear Andrea on your POD! Such a brilliant gem!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 5:38 AM
I see why you received POTD on this one! Congratulations, Andrea!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Boy, those were the care free days weren't they. I enjoyed this poem so much Andrea. Congratulations on POTD!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 10:31 PM
Back with BIG congrats, Andrea! Hugs, Rhonda :)
Wolf Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 8:38 PM
Hey, let's welcome back -- you guessed it -- Firefly Nights! And here's our host during this Firework Summer Festival, Andrrrrrrrrrrrea DIETRICH. C'mon let's put 'em together for Andrrrrrrrrea now! … Oh, quiet, Gershon, and eat your vegetables! lol... Congrats, my friend. Hats off! :) gw
Nicole Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 7:03 PM
In dreams, the thrill is never gone. You can relived those days and each moment. This is beautiful, and it holds a tender melancholy all at the same time. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Koplin Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Congrats on POTD!
La France Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Andrea, congratulations on Potd with your awesome poem - Constance
Watt Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 12:46 PM
A thoughtful musing on childhood nostalgia and the inevitability of growing up. I loved the line "firefly nights and my firework summers". Wonderful in every way, Andrea. Big CONGRATS for the honor of POTD!
One Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 11:28 AM
Just returning to say congrats on POTD..
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 12:37 PM
I'm just seeing I got that. Thanks for letting me know!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. So true. Stay young, it is only a number. Enjoy your win and day..............
Wanter Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Never saw this form before, but it works! Nice memories. Congratulations!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 8:02 AM
Back with congratulations Andrea! I hope you have a fabulous day :))) xomo!
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Back with congrats Andrea on poem of the day.
Gondolf Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 6:44 AM
Back to say congrats on POTD, Andrea, way to go! John
Warrior Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 6:11 AM
Superb writing Andrea...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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