The Thrill Is Gone

Used to run outside bundled up for winter.
Pulled my sled through snow to the hill where other
children slid with glee and our young hearts pounding.
Thrill of December.

Used to swing for hours in my day-time dreaming.
Played my records thinking of my Prince Charming.
Sang my love aloud in the woods to no one.
Thrill of my teen years.

Used to bike to town with my friends or sisters.
Ran and swam and walked to the park for snow cones.
Sports I played all day till the sun was setting.
Thrill of my summers.

Gone are firefly nights and my firework summers.
Thrills of childhood no longer hold enticement.
How I even dreamed while awake I wonder . . .
now that I’m older.

July 12, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 7/27/2020 11:38:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Andrea. That's the thing I love the most about your poems. They find their way right into the hearts of readers :)
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Date: 7/26/2020 10:40:00 AM
lovely nostalgic write
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Date: 7/23/2020 1:18:00 PM
A nice write Andrea, and so true to life, the thrill is gone as we age, we do however find pleasure in other things now! Congrats on a top win!
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Date: 7/22/2020 6:41:00 PM
Where was I, besides the recent SILENCE, my compliments on your deserving 1st Place and POTD--doubly so! Hooray, Andrea, perpetual praise truly -- Aloha~@William
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/24/2020 3:37:00 PM
thanks , William!! I need to visit your winning poem as well.
Date: 7/22/2020 5:43:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm with you, roll back the years by 20 or 25, that would do nicely.
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Date: 7/22/2020 4:37:00 PM
My original comment when you got potd has vanished .. many congrats on your win too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2020 10:27:00 AM
What an excellent poem, Andrea:-) No wonder this won you a well-deserved POTD! Congratulations on your first place win in my contest!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/24/2020 3:37:00 PM
thanks so much for the inspiration. That form is NOT easy!!! but the theme is very dear to me.
Date: 7/18/2020 11:38:00 AM
Is it really gone or a little harder to reach...Congratulations Andrea on POTD
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Date: 7/15/2020 6:56:00 PM
Wow, BIG CONGRATS dear Andrea on your POD! Such a brilliant gem!
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Date: 7/15/2020 5:38:00 AM
I see why you received POTD on this one! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 7/14/2020 10:58:00 PM
Boy, those were the care free days weren't they. I enjoyed this poem so much Andrea. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 7/14/2020 10:31:00 PM
Back with BIG congrats, Andrea! Hugs, Rhonda :)
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Date: 7/14/2020 8:38:00 PM
Hey, let's welcome back -- you guessed it -- Firefly Nights! And here's our host during this Firework Summer Festival, Andrrrrrrrrrrrea DIETRICH. C'mon let's put 'em together for Andrrrrrrrrea now! … Oh, quiet, Gershon, and eat your vegetables! lol... Congrats, my friend. Hats off! :) gw
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Date: 7/14/2020 7:03:00 PM
In dreams, the thrill is never gone. You can relived those days and each moment. This is beautiful, and it holds a tender melancholy all at the same time. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/14/2020 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2020 3:25:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 7/14/2020 1:46:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on Potd with your awesome poem - Constance
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Date: 7/14/2020 12:46:00 PM
A thoughtful musing on childhood nostalgia and the inevitability of growing up. I loved the line "firefly nights and my firework summers". Wonderful in every way, Andrea. Big CONGRATS for the honor of POTD!
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Date: 7/14/2020 11:28:00 AM
Just returning to say congrats on POTD..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/14/2020 12:37:00 PM
I'm just seeing I got that. Thanks for letting me know!
Date: 7/14/2020 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. So true. Stay young, it is only a number. Enjoy your win and day..............
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:55:00 AM
Never saw this form before, but it works! Nice memories. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2020 8:02:00 AM
Back with congratulations Andrea! I hope you have a fabulous day :))) xomo!
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Date: 7/14/2020 6:55:00 AM
Back with congrats Andrea on poem of the day.
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Date: 7/14/2020 6:44:00 AM
Back to say congrats on POTD, Andrea, way to go! John
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Date: 7/14/2020 6:11:00 AM
Superb writing Andrea...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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