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The Thorn of a Rose

The thorn of a rose Sharply reached into my life From my brain, down to my toes I could only feel The pain instead of beauty All the worries became real Stuck in a garden Wilting petals in winter Wishing I could hear the wren No birds were calling There were no answers to find The time seemed to be stalling Tangled in the weeds Caught by fear that held on tight I tried to find the new seeds Before the ground froze Words blew in the wind to me It is I, to be the rose Heidi Sands 11/30/17

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Date: 12/1/2017 1:49:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Heidi, while we all have thorns we must focus on our petals and inner beauty. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/1/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment on this John. I hope all is well. Have a nice day :)
Date: 12/1/2017 9:26:00 AM
A beautiful portrait of hope and renewal, Heidi XXOO
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/1/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike ! XO
Date: 11/30/2017 8:47:00 PM
Beautifully rendered Heidi...great ending..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2017 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 11/30/2017 5:09:00 PM
Well written Heidi..made me think!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay :)

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