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The Third Station of the Cross

Weak and tired I fall on rough cobbled stones.
Blood oozed down my face across my cheekbones.
My knees are bruised and pain spreads from my brain, 
The wooden bar hurt my back again.

Man must learn as I accept my bad fall.
The time must come for you to confess all.
I fall but sinless I still bear your sins, 
Get up, repent and a new life begins.

Still, I suffer as lashes hit my back,
For soldiers hate and like a wolfish pack
They just wish me to arrive up on the hill
Whilst Pharisaic zealots curse me ill. 

Yet I speak not one sole word nor complain.
I suffer pain and pray all are not in vain.
Sturdy hands roughly urge and lift me up.
Gives me my cross, and I drink my bitter cup.

I came to save humanity from hell, 
That I might see you all in Heaven dwell.
Haltingly I trudge on the cobbled rocks, 
Die on a cross. O happy paradox.
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George Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 1:30 AM
When i attend the Way of the Cross, often my eyes get misted with tears. The third station always spurts in me a surge of emotions. Jesus's suffering and crucifixion, so touchingly narrated, dear Victor !
Proxenos Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:12 AM
A beautiful Easter poem - and so well written, KUDOS my friend, He died so that others would be saved! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 2:50 PM
A magnificent write on the third station of the cross Victor. Imagine the agony Jesus suffered for humanity’s sake, to take the sting from out of our sins. Blessings, Belle
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Wonderful write! He bore our cross, willingly and with promise. He came to make this walk, this walk of shame and death. Born again! Born again! He is our resurrection! God bless you in this Lenten season. Hugs ~ Kim
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:26 AM
I become saddened each time I read or study or think about the ordeal of the cross because my sinful nature is what sent Him to the cross. He did it all for humanity whether they accept Him or not. Thanks for sharing this one at this time of year when Easter is on the way. Your visits to my page encourage. Sara
May Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:25 AM
He gave it all to redeem us from sin, Powerful write Victor
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 10:22 PM
Very powerful and heartfelt write at a time of Easter. Blessings friend
Buehler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 9:10 PM
The beautiful words of this poem evoke thoughts of our dear Lord's sacrifice, as we prepare to celebrate the joy of His resurrection. Wonderfully written, Victor. :)
Rose  Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 1:13 PM
the stations can be so powerful, I dip in them each year, your humanity and passion shows in every word you pen dear friend, soon he will resurrect and what a joy that shall be *
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 9:32 AM
- A beautiful and powerful poem, Victor - hugs
DiMino Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 9:27 AM
"I came to save humanity from hell, That I might see you all in Heaven dwell," Beautiful tribute to our Divine Lord. Blessings my friend! When will man push away his stone of lesser ego, denying entrance to Heaven?~ step out from under, faithfully peel off the crushing Cross (The Law) of Cause and Effect to which his soul yet adheres despite Christ's loving sacrifice. The Kingdom is at hand. That near for eternal grasp.
Ricci Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 5:43 AM
Good Afternoon Victor. Hello. Yes, you have captured the being of it all. It is timely always and especially now during Lent. I think we can all agree. This entry was also thought out and executed. Thank you as always for sharing your poetic talent. Have a beautiful afternoon. May today be all that it can be and show you everything good. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 5:27 AM
Aptly conveyed in reverence of almighty. Solemn vibes throughout in service of the one who gave his life. Excellent write, Victor.
Poet Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 4:51 AM
A high level of poetry was composed. Despite the historicity of specific occurrences continuing to stir the embers of debate, your analogies are stunning.
Cunningham Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 3:27 AM
We must never forget the sacrifice our Saviour made for us. Tom
Daniel Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 2:23 AM
His death was sure painful, Victor, and all so that we could live, wonderful poem:)
Volumes Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 2:09 AM
I intended to write a poem about Stations of the Cross. Dear Victor I am so glad I didn't. It would have shrunk to obscurity compared to yours. This poem is beautiful Victor. In every way, just as it should be. A credit to you my friend. You are an incredible writer and poet.
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March 17, 2023 at 10:18 AM
You can still do it.
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