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I dedicate this poem to Armand, we wish you and family well!

 



 

The father who loses a son The lover left all but alone The child who loses a dog The clown who loses his nose The day grandpa fades into the past The night when the house is no longer there The lady of the evening anticipating No one in her boudoir, silence screaming The season when all the flowers die The time when war drums beat My brother who drowned in the sea His passing became my very own misery The blind man with no visions Scavenging for the eyes of the cow The clouds that made the rain The villages washed away in pain The invisible and the black plaques Humanity in numbers falling prey The lovely lady in red Murdered for her diamond ring The bride to be, in all her glory Heartbeat stolen in a medical robbery The singer in the opera Her tongue cut, cultural slaughter Teenage lovers, in lustful love Driving drunk to their graves The high school queen on display Later Shivering and no teeth, no graceful ways The timeless horrors of age That shall capture the balance of us happy souls Lest we forget the dead born Losing the chance to shed even one tear Strangers all, I promise we shall meet The final boarding call, the graveyard is terminal C When you stare into a stranger’s eye Remember these wistful ponderings We all have suffered loss and pain The smile and compassion you offer to all Never shall this be in vain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2015 6:30:00 PM
There are so many powerful two line poems that are a part of this masterpiece. I thank you wholeheartedly for your well wishes, for this dedication and for your words that reminds us all we are never alone in life if we reach out to our brothers and sisters. Thank you my brother. A Fav! Love Armand.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/11/2015 10:29:00 AM
Sorry for responding so late, just trying to catch up, is been a hectic time lately!!! I am glad you liked this my friend!
Date: 3/23/2015 10:40:00 AM
A very perceptive write, Arthur. A 7. I see the pendulum has swung and I was not around to see it! Better late than never...:) Kim
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/11/2015 10:28:00 AM
:) thanks Kim
Date: 3/14/2015 7:45:00 AM
You describe so many different types of 'loss' Arthur - so beautifully crafted, so deep and sad - I especially love the final couplet. :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Jan! ended on a good note for a change! :)
Date: 3/14/2015 2:33:00 AM
Wow, Arthur! A great write and reminder that suffering is a part of the human condition we all share. It's easy to exchange laughter and pleasantries, but much more difficult to share our pains...many hide it under bitter masks :( xxxRhonda
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 10:15:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda, and yes so true!
Date: 3/14/2015 1:06:00 AM
Wow this an amazing write. A+++. I am so sorry about your brother, I can't imagine the pain. All your lines were favorites but this def won my heart "When you stare into a stranger’s eye Remember these wistful ponderings We all have suffered loss and pain The smile and compassion you offer to all Never shall this be in vain" #7
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/14/2015 1:25:00 AM
Lol I need to learn how to differentiate between fiction and real. Either way this is a captivating write.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/14/2015 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, and this is all fiction, I have no brother, was just one of many examples in poem!!! Hugs

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