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The Swords Speak Premiere Contest Winner

When foreign breath emits oppressive reek That wilts resplendent petals lilies grow, And salts the pureness found in Freedom’s creek Which runs where only thoughts enlightened know; When threats arise against our liberty, Be they by force or more clandestine made, Since any strike upon the cherry tree Exposes flesh withheld from Lincoln’s shade; Then stand together with your fellow man Prepared to save his life by way your own; For blood which sheds as such is thicker than The blood whose garden sprouts in monotone - He fights with all his might for only “me”, But falls where neighbors reign as brothers free. 2/6/17

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Date: 2/13/2017 2:24:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Phil!! It grabs and doesn't let go to the end!! Congratulations!! Well deserved win!! Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 2/8/2017 7:41:00 PM
Brilliant Phillip, congratulations...
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Date: 2/7/2017 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations
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Date: 2/7/2017 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Philllip, a great sonnet :)
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Date: 2/7/2017 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Phillip:) well deserved:)
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Date: 2/7/2017 5:32:00 AM
Awesome. Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 2/7/2017 3:40:00 AM
Oww, Phillip, you won, so many congrats my friend! This beautiful sonnet is so well written, well deserved :)
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Date: 2/7/2017 2:55:00 AM
Good flow, good everything, well done. You have top spot, so rejoice and keep your poem, Phillip!
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/28/2017 11:33:00 AM
Further, I hope you won't send what you *think* are stinkers into my contests.
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/27/2017 1:54:00 PM
Your poem last time was not a stinker - you are too modest!
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Julia Ward
Date: 2/7/2017 9:40:00 AM
Last time, you told me your winning poem in my contest was deleted by mistake - such a shame!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/7/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thank you! I promise never to delete anything again (unless it's a real stinker)
Date: 2/6/2017 11:00:00 PM
Amazing words. Very well expressed sonnet. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/6/2017 5:18:00 PM
GREAT sonnet, Phillip:) Good luck!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 2/6/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thanks DT. If I'm being truthful, while I know it lacks any real depth or metaphorical value, I was really pleased with the rhythm of it. I've been struggling a lot with that here of late.

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