Premiere Contest WinnerThe Swords Speak

When foreign breath emits oppressive reek
That wilts resplendent petals lilies grow,
And salts the pureness found in Freedom’s creek
Which runs where only thoughts enlightened know;
When threats arise against our liberty,
Be they by force or more clandestine made,
Since any strike upon the cherry tree
Exposes flesh withheld from Lincoln’s shade;
Then stand together with your fellow man
Prepared to save his life by way your own;
For blood which sheds as such is thicker than
The blood whose garden sprouts in monotone -
   He fights with all his might for only “me”,
    But falls where neighbors reign as brothers free.

2/6/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Burch Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 2:24 PM
What a wonderful poem Phil!! It grabs and doesn't let go to the end!! Congratulations!! Well deserved win!! Big Hugggs deb
Smith Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Brilliant Phillip, congratulations...
Roberts Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 9:52 PM
Congratulations
Polydoro Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations on your win, Philllip, a great sonnet :)
Daniel Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:56 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Phillip:) well deserved:)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 5:32 AM
Awesome. Congrats on your win! :)
White Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 3:40 AM
Oww, Phillip, you won, so many congrats my friend! This beautiful sonnet is so well written, well deserved :)
Ward Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 2:55 AM
Good flow, good everything, well done. You have top spot, so rejoice and keep your poem, Phillip!
Ward Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Further, I hope you won't send what you *think* are stinkers into my contests.
Ward Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Your poem last time was not a stinker - you are too modest!
Ward Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 9:40 AM
Last time, you told me your winning poem in my contest was deleted by mistake - such a shame!
Garcia Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Thank you! I promise never to delete anything again (unless it's a real stinker)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:00 PM
Amazing words. Very well expressed sonnet. Good luck in the contest.
Turner Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 5:18 PM
GREAT sonnet, Phillip:) Good luck!
Garcia Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Thanks DT. If I'm being truthful, while I know it lacks any real depth or metaphorical value, I was really pleased with the rhythm of it. I've been struggling a lot with that here of late.
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