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The Swimming Hole

The Swimming Hole A burbling tuneful peaty burn Like amber whisky flowing clear Where darting minnows twist and turn Is soothing music to my ear. Between the banks of rushes green Below the falls a deep dark pool Where lads who come to swim are seen Enjoying fun and keeping cool. I paddle in the flowing brine Where icy waters cool my feet And ripple through my toes, sublime. A feeling rare, supremely sweet. The swimming hole, a place to be When sun is warm and spirits free I spend a quiet happy day And watch my worries float away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/11/2010 1:59:00 PM
I would love to visit this one in the summer. It sounds wonderful.
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:43:00 PM
enjoyed, congrats on the win!
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Date: 2/8/2010 9:41:00 AM
I love " amber whiskey" line. Nicely done and a keeper as they saqy. Thank you for your rememberance of me and my work. I appreciate it. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 2/6/2010 3:46:00 PM
I"d like to be there this winter day! congrats, Margaret!!
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Date: 2/6/2010 2:52:00 PM
I remember these places before one had to HAVE a pool to enjoy summer...a most excellent memory! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on your second place win in Mac's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write.. thankxxx so much for your special comments and congrats on my poetry also... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/6/2010 1:27:00 PM
such a pleasant feel to this poem. Wonderful writing, Margaret...congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/6/2010 12:16:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on placing second in Mac's contest. Enjoy your big win. Keep on writing!!! Karen
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win. A truly great entry. Thanks for entering
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:55:00 PM
a relaxing poem to end the day. john h loving iii
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