The Swimming Hole

The Swimming Hole


A burbling tuneful peaty burn
Like amber whisky flowing clear
Where darting minnows twist and turn
Is soothing music to my ear.

Between the banks of rushes green
Below the falls a deep dark pool
Where lads who come to swim are seen
Enjoying fun and keeping cool.

I paddle in the flowing brine
Where icy waters cool my feet
And ripple through my toes, sublime.
A feeling rare, supremely sweet.

The swimming hole, a place to be
When sun is warm and spirits free
I spend a quiet happy day
And watch my worries float away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Spears Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 1:59 PM
I would love to visit this one in the summer. It sounds wonderful.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:43 PM
enjoyed, congrats on the win!
Keogh Jr. Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 9:41 AM
I love " amber whiskey" line. Nicely done and a keeper as they saqy. Thank you for your rememberance of me and my work. I appreciate it. Regards, Gerard.
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 3:46 PM
I"d like to be there this winter day! congrats, Margaret!!
Guzzi Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 2:52 PM
I remember these places before one had to HAVE a pool to enjoy summer...a most excellent memory! Congrad's Light & Love
Richards Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 1:27 PM
such a pleasant feel to this poem. Wonderful writing, Margaret...congratulations on your win! Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Congrats Margaret on your second place win in Mac's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write.. thankxxx so much for your special comments and congrats on my poetry also... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 6, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on placing second in Mac's contest. Enjoy your big win. Keep on writing!!! Karen
Brown Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's contest Margaret. Love, Carol
Mcgovern Avatar
February 6, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win. A truly great entry. Thanks for entering
Loving Iii Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 5:55 PM
a relaxing poem to end the day. john h loving iii
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