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The Surge of Ecstasy

Reaching the dead end of the broken road of hope my introvert mind took a forced nonchalant view, of life poised in a precarious state, trying to grope with the unique pathway to take me to a destination new. From within I heard someone say, "go gallivanting around, acquiesce to the timely dictate of the dormant desire". So, travelling across the wasteland, surprised I found you in dewed meadow, sprinting with finesse in spring air. Trailing your firm footprints I traced for me a new path, the rising sun splashing colors on your shimmering face, took me to the place where the first love takes birth. In our dawn rendezvous dreams spread arms to embrace. My mind was swept away by the surge of ethereal ecstasy, I then knew where my life on wheel of time would take me.
May 7, 2018.

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Date: 5/8/2018 12:30:00 PM
This is beautiful and you wove in all the words effortlessly, creating a smooth, natural and enthralling flow that was a pleasure to read. An impressive job creatively delivered. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/15/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thank you, CayCay for your encouraging words.
Date: 5/7/2018 8:58:00 AM
The surge of ecstasy, I like it, hope it does well in the contest!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/15/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thank you, John.

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