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The Sunset Collection

the sun sinks downward light and color extend far rays, hope and closure light shines between trees as the sun moves on to set the memories stay the day comes to end it is a colorful show sun closes curtain Heidi Sands 10/2/22 Placed 4th in the Haiku collection of three. Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2022 11:04:00 AM

~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2022 11:23:00 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your comment :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2022 3:51:00 AM

Congratulations on being on the winners' list with this creative work. Aren't some days' end curtains beautiful. Way to go. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2022 5:23:00 AM

Thank you Sara. Yes, beautiful days :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/9/2022 6:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, with this lovely collection.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2022 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Sotto :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/9/2022 6:26:00 AM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2022 6:45:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/9/2022 5:43:00 AM

Heidi, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful poems!

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/9/2022 5:46:00 AM

Thank you Tania :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/8/2022 2:23:00 AM

Lovely are these. Harry

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/8/2022 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Harry :)

Valsa George

Date: 10/5/2022 9:01:00 PM

Beautiful sunset scenes caught in your imagination's lens . Wonderfully done Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2022 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Valsa. I also see them often from where I live. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/4/2022 11:54:00 AM

The pen of your inspiration has created a series of wondrous Haiku, my dearest friend, Heidi! Blessings.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2022 12:21:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios! Blessings, my friend :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2022 7:35:00 AM

Yes, that sun closes the curtains of each's day play. We wonder sometimes did we spend that day well. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2022 8:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Sara. I appreciate your feedback and I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Alkas Poetry

Date: 10/4/2022 6:14:00 AM

beautiful haikus manifesting the beauty of the sun falling asleep, a poetic beauty masterfully closing curtains, congrats dear Heidi, salute, alkas

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2022 6:20:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind feedback and support Alkas! I hope you have a nice day :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/4/2022 2:51:00 AM

Very nice imagery Heidi, best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2022 4:58:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2022 7:03:00 PM

Your descriptions bring the sunset to fore as if it is happening in front of the reader. A FAVE from me for this linked portrait you paint:--- the sun sinks downward-- light shines between trees-- the day comes to end--it is a colorful show-- sun closes curtain.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2022 5:14:00 AM

Hi Vijay. Thank you so much for the kind feedback and special thanks for the Fave too!. I appreciate your support always. I hope your day is nice :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/2/2022 6:27:00 PM

Just exactly how sunsets are this time of year, Heidi! Lovely written! :) Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/3/2022 5:12:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. I appreciate your positive comments :)