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sun rises then sun sets a day has been completed nature has its way

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 11/26/2023 8:53:00 AM

I love this Bill . Nature has her own rhythm….. it is lovely and beautiful. We can learn a lot by watching the rise and set of the sun . All elements in nature have their inner clock . The passage of time painted for all to see . Blessings to you dear friend, Susan :)

Bill Baker
Date: 11/26/2023 2:29:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Susan. They're a lot of lessons we can learn from observing nature. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/24/2023 5:33:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, Dear Bill. Nature has a rhythm we may not always realize. Your poem is wonderfully vivid, and the picture adds exquisite charm. Just to let you know - you may be interested - I have posted a blog with the translated first chapter of the book in Bengali I published. Best wishes ~

Bill Baker
Date: 11/24/2023 11:46:00 AM

Thank you for the comments and the heads up on your first chapter, Mala. I'll read it later, we have a wedding to go to today. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/23/2023 2:47:00 PM

a soft and vivid Haiku, dearest Bill...one that gave me pause as I thought about how time is measured. We humans choose the artificial means, a clock. While nature marks time in its own way....how profound. Hugs from me,

Bill Baker
Date: 11/23/2023 6:10:00 PM

You're very insightful, Sara. I like that in you. :- Love, your Westside Writing Bear. Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/23/2023 1:45:00 PM

Time may be an abstract way for humans to understand change. Plato thought that time was celestial motion. Wonderful haiku to convey how nature benefits Humans.

Bill Baker
Date: 11/23/2023 6:11:00 PM

Thank you for your comments and mention of Plato view of time, my dear friend. Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2023 11:34:00 AM

- True and lovely written, Bill :) - hugs

Bill Baker
Date: 11/23/2023 6:10:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise, Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/23/2023 11:34:00 AM

Such a wonderful Haiku my friend. We are born, we die.

Bill Baker
Date: 11/23/2023 6:12:00 PM

That's it, Jerry the rest is just life. :-) Bill

Silent One

Date: 11/23/2023 10:40:00 AM

Lovely haiku my friend.. nice to see you writing and posting such a vivid poem.. the image that goes with it is fitting and compliments your poetic words..

Bill Baker
Date: 11/23/2023 6:13:00 PM

Thanks for the comment and noticing the image. Have a pleasant weekend, Silent One. Bill

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/23/2023 9:18:00 AM

i love that poem, trying to be as close as nature as we can, thanks for the " enticing" ? poem yann

Bill Baker
Date: 11/23/2023 6:09:00 PM

You're welcome, my friend. Thanks for the visit and comment. Bill