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The Sun Surprises Another Day

THE SUN SURPRISES ANOTHER DAY The sun surprises another day Weary with malaise and muddy ilk Tulips bow in a trumpet spray I drink the dark curtain’s milk Weary with malaise and muddy ilk my eyes blink back falling stars I drink the dark curtain’s milk Blue moon pays homage - i see healing scars My eyes blink back falling stars Tulips bow in a trumpet spray Blue moon pays homage - i see healing scars The sun surprises another day 6/5/2017 Pantoum Form

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Date: 7/4/2017 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, thank you for entering my contest ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2017 11:04:00 PM
Thank you, Eve :)
Date: 7/3/2017 9:36:00 PM
Great write Kim :) and nice win!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2017 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, Jeremy!
Date: 6/5/2017 11:02:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful Kim. I love how you wove this all together to come out with an ending stanza that is perfect.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 2:26:00 PM
I am learning :) Thanks, Chris!

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