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the sun looks too good on you

in my little garden, i am the queen, quite, you wait, i wanted to tell: you took my place, it is my seat, - from there, i write and read, i watch the seagulls fly and scream, as the sun caresses the day, in my little garden, i am the queen sitting like a butterfly on a flower, i could feel you breathing, dressed in a blue shirt, blue as the sky, your eyes, i wanted to tell you: don't move! the sun looks too good on you don't move, don't even smile! the sun looks too good on you the sun looks too good on you

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Date: 5/7/2024 10:31:00 AM
This is so beautiful and soulful, how youv written this poem. It has a rhythm and also the descriptive nature of your word weaving truly is impressive! Especially the opening and also the similes as well as the ending. Perfect title too! Pleasure reading this.
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Date: 2/11/2024 11:48:00 AM
Such a sweet and adorable poem. Well done, Maria.
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Maria Mitea
Date: 2/11/2024 12:18:00 PM
Thank you, Shane, for reading and writing back! I am happy you liked it! Cheers,

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