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The Sun Is Sleeping

the sun is sleeping and the wind is weeping each day bare branches increase and fallen leaves rest in peace today, snowflakes are snickering and winter is whispering soon trees will put on white gowns and winter will be full of life and sounds of falling snow and of Christmas lights that glow of ice moaning, moaning, moaning and rivers groaning of birds and little creatures searching and of snowflakes that keep weeping weeping, weeping, weeping, weeping while the sun is sleeping, sleeping __________________________ October 26, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/the sun is sleeping Copyright Protected, ID 10-1297-978-26 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(33) sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 10/27/2020 11:58:00 PM
Constance, I love this poem with all these repetends. Lovely pace and rhyme. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2020 7:00:00 AM
Carol, thank you for the nice comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 10/26/2020 10:03:00 AM
well written, Constance, great imagery and deep emotions of winter.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2020 10:37:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the compliment and comment, appreciate _Constance

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