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The Sun

There is something mighty special about the sun I can't really put my finger on it I am not even sure that if I tried to explain it You would understand it There is a sense of joy when the sun is out I see happy faces big broad smiles Colours like rainbows extended from miles Tulips and daises dancing in the wind Children prancing up and down. There is something special about the sun Its like an energetic beam A source of human energy You can say its like a type of drug that boosts our body I cant really describe it Its like giving hope to the ill There is something very special about the sun It has away of making every meaningful moment feel just right.

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Date: 6/17/2017 12:38:00 PM
And I'm so enjoying the sun today. I particularly like the line, "Colours of rainbows extended for miles." You truly see colours everywhere when the sun is out. Love this Patricia.
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Patricia . Garcia Howard Bramble
Date: 7/5/2017 2:51:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/16/2017 2:01:00 PM
So true! There is something very special about the sun! It does exactly what you say . Well written :)
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Patricia . Garcia Howard Bramble
Date: 7/5/2017 2:51:00 PM
thank you

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