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The Suicidal Moth

Once there was a moth that flew up to Doctor John He said I'm depressed, I'm a suicidal one" Doc John said, "I'm no shrink," "Why stop here do you think?" He said, "Well, I had to, because the light was on!"

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Rhoda Tripp

Date: 4/29/2018 8:40:00 PM

Lmao! This is so darn cute! You always have that gift of twist. Very funny writes. Faved!

Pat Adams
Date: 4/30/2018 2:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Rhoda. Gift of twist.....I like that!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/27/2018 6:24:00 PM

Oh, no, Pat! You are so funny!

Pat Adams
Date: 4/28/2018 9:05:00 AM

Thank you but, I blame it on a crazy bone! .... 80)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/27/2018 9:03:00 AM

Must - follow - light - must - follow - light - very cute, nice start to the day, Pat!

Pat Adams
Date: 4/27/2018 5:55:00 PM

Thank you Michelle. I hope you've had a fantastic day!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/27/2018 8:37:00 AM

L O L and a good giggly groan ;p

Pat Adams
Date: 4/27/2018 5:54:00 PM

Thanks! I get one about as much as the other I suppose, but any reaction is cool! ......80)