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The Sublime Myth

Meaning hangs on a wing
and briefly holds together,
tipping on some fine edge,
a feathers weight from oblivion.
Take this evening, a sunset
settling upon the water, the fleck
of a small boat with its solitary figure
floating the still, birds flying overhead, 
each a part of a moment 
sliced from a second.

Mere coincidence, a chance picture 
put together by a confluence of things
in a corner of a vast cosmos. 
The birds trailing their cries
in long threads across the sky
seem to hymn a lament,
the dark slowly closing over
the world like a large eyelid 
before the coming of night
and the onset of sleep.

There is nothing but a sublime 
myth to keep the soul awake,
to make of what is passing 
into something permanent, 
meaning kept afloat on that
small, distant image of a boat
set upon a blessed sea,
it's existence flickering in
and out of a pale beam
of hope.
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Lane Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 3:41 PM
"A feather's weight from oblivion" That's as close as possible. Your descriptions always impress me with observations that most people would certainly not see. Time and place make all the difference to what we do, see and how we react to the roads we travel in life. Your sensitivity to everything is a gift, Paul.
Willason Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 3:31 PM
You are so kind in your comments dear Lin....indeed gives a welcome jolt to my creative energy levels which, at my age, is a precious gift. Thankyou ....sincerely valued, Paul
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