The Studio At the Beach II

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The Studio At The Beach Part II- The Green Dress Regalia

Her dear father and his consoling ways
If she couldn’t concentrate on schoolwork
he'd put his book down, light his cigar,
In a deep mellow reverie, pick up his guitar
I know it hasn’t been easy with schoolwork
he'd sigh, smoke billowing from his mouth
Shrouding our faces in a gray-white fog
He'd speak in a comforting melodious purr
Wrapping his arm around his daughter’s shoulder,
My precious   little jewel, there is no reason
For you to be so downcast, you're breaking my heart

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Date: 7/6/2022 7:37:00 AM
Catching up on poems of yours I've missed, reading in reverse order, so comments seem strange after "Papi". Wonderful tribute to you Dad, Anaya. Have a great day my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/3/2023 7:23:00 PM
A belated Thank you, Bill! xhugs ~Anaya
Date: 6/22/2022 1:01:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me delight virtually at your studio in the beach. Likewise, I rejoice with your Dad for this tribute of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 6/23/2022 7:02:00 PM
Always a pleasure to have your gracious comment, My father would be appreciative your generous words. Stay well Beata!
Date: 6/21/2022 7:42:00 AM
Oh! This is a tremendous and beautiful tribute to your dad, Anaya! Absolutely love this. Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/21/2022 6:21:00 PM
I am, grateful to you, Seeker. Thank you for reading my poem and enjoying. Your presence is most welcome. A fan, Anaya
Date: 6/21/2022 1:58:00 AM
Hi Anaya, this is a great tribute to your loving father! I see him smoking a cigar in thoughtful mood, feeling a little sad about his daughter, yet with fond words of consolation. Congratulations on your great win!
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Date: 6/21/2022 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa, that is the image of him I had while writing. Glad to share with you. Best wishes and be well my friend.
Date: 6/19/2022 1:41:00 AM
Great tribute to your father. A lovely poem to be remembered.
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Date: 6/20/2022 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, Victor, for enjoying a poem that I can share with. Thought I would put up the painting because it portrays the nostalgia I hold in my heart! Be well
Date: 6/19/2022 12:19:00 AM
Dear Anaya, this is such a ver lovely moving poem. I'm pretty sure your angel dad is smiling and wrapping around his arm to you again right now. A very precious gift to him flying to heaven this Father's Day. I love this poem a lot reminding me of my dad when he was still on earth, too. Thank you so much for sharing this marvelous poem along with your beautiful painting. Thanks a lot. God bless you always. Hugs
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Date: 6/20/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Len for enjoying a poem that I can share with others and I'm so happy it reminds you of your father, cool beans! Thought I would put up the paintings because it portrays the nostalgia I hold in my heart! Hugs to you!
Date: 6/18/2022 9:38:00 PM
Dear Anaya, your tender yet vibrant verse brings me to the center of this precious moment. Your gifted pen spills an intimate scene ripe with love, admiration and appreciation for your beloved papi, Enrique, a kind loving man and father. A deeply moving poem. I adore your painting accompanying this exquisite poem.. you are very talented with both words and paints. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/20/2022 1:03:00 PM
My father leaves me with a treasure trove of fond memories, his passing was quick, and I was lucky to spend time with him the last year of his life, it was good. I don't feel as if I lost him, but that he is out of his pain and in a good place. There was a time I really enjoyed painting, I use perspective, watercolors, I stopped and who knows if ever will paint again. I am happy you enjoyed my poem and artwork; it means a lot to me. I am glad you enjoyed Susan, you are too kind. Thank you, I Am Anaya
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