The Streets of His Childhood

He skipped up the streets
   of his childhood days
No vehicle honked
   nor sluggish dog lay 

Picket fences swung open
   no locks on their gates
Deserted shops covered
   their wares with their Fates

He dabbed at his cheek
   a pool of tears forming there
As the Breezes fell silent
   and the Sun did not care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Romios Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Wow~ this touched my heart, Gershon. Each line..perfection, Panagiuota
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 11:14 AM
Appreciate the sincerely heartfelt comment, Panagiota! :)
Sands Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 9:04 AM
Well written. I can feel this and the ending is perfect, Gershon :)
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Glad that these deserted streets spoke to you, Heidi. :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 8:03 PM
The poignancy of this nostalgic write in no way takes away from the sadness.
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Good point, Caren. :) gw
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 7:55 PM
A sad little big poem Gershon. An art to it. Some of your best work. xomo (and my captcha, sky)
Wolf Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 7:59 PM
A million thanks for this comment on an effort that I felt clicked in as I revised it. So very much appreciated, O kindred spirit. :) gw
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