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What's worse than finding out you've been lied to - tricked?


 

She knew she wasn't the first shy girl conned beneath a scintillant moon. Why do boys lie so - inveigling fabrications - hoping to impress? Why interlace fibs, when, from first sight, she had longed for his carnal lips? Now doubts danced - as if evil spirits were called and asked to watch, and gloat. "I can't talk to you again," she said, "after all - you’re a stranger." She doubted he cared - she doubted everything, like she had a soiled heart.

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Date: 12/10/2020 6:49:00 AM
Boys lie to get what they want, that's as old as life itself. I wrote a poem on the same subject "Shrewdly Played Charades". On the other side of the coin, girls "use what they have" to get what they want. I wrote a poem about that as well "Like a Game of Chess". Hope your week has been good. John
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Anais Vionet
Date: 12/10/2020 7:24:00 AM
I liked "Like a Game of Chess" the best - the guy in "Shrewdly Played Charades" was just RUDE =p
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Anais Vionet
Date: 12/10/2020 7:12:00 AM
ooo! Thanks, I check those out!

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