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The Story I Wrote - Ifl

I was writing a story, A story that took place In autumn, A story about a woman who became a shadow of herself, A woman who earnestly battled her midnight, A woman who was chauffeured to her past, A woman whose past cloaked her present, Her last days were heart-wrenching, I remembered my grandmother, I remembered the last discussion I had with her, I remembered how she navigated her life's sojourn, I could see her face, I could hear her voice, I felt her around, Her reassuring words echoed in me, Tears streamed down my eyes. February 13, 2023. I Felt Like Poetry Contest, Charles Messina.

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Date: 2/22/2023 7:00:00 AM
- Sad memories, beautifully written - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/22/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine. I'm honoured. Blessings.
Date: 2/21/2023 4:38:00 AM
I feel you're hurt, Thompson. I felt the same way much too often. A fantastic heartfelt write, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Charlie
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Date: 2/21/2023 6:54:00 AM
Thank you, Charles. I'm honoured.
Date: 2/20/2023 8:44:00 PM
"I remembered how she navigated her life's sojourn" - deep feelings very beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Thompson Emate
Date: 2/21/2023 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. It's an honour.
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Thompson Emate
Date: 2/21/2023 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. It's an honour.

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