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Such deep, impassioned, love startles our mortal ways. Could we possibly have that same eternal love? Flowing in our souls and blood, and being blind, make light of it? How blessed, how young, how fortunate,lovers they! To refuse on this fetid earth to stay. And of poison did imbibe and hence dance forever in a moonlit sky., Willing to live in eternity, together. oh! Not a beautiful flower, nor a stunning sunset, no! Could keep them here, why, on this so controlling a place! Be still this night and you will hear their enchanting and bubbling laughter.. It whispers in trees, eternally, day and night, a fortnight and foreverafter. Poem ~1~ February 14, 2024

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Date: 3/20/2024 4:29:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your POTD! An absolute masterpiece.. Such a breathtaking verse, Panagiota! Really enjoyed... Your talent shines! Many blessings to you, my friend..
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Date: 3/20/2024 4:55:00 PM
Robertina…no problem! I miss many POTDs, please, please do not feel badly. My poet mentor cheered this one on. That made me happy.. i cannot always pen like this. I like to experiment to. I have so much to learn.Poetry was sung not read in Greece. Read your poems aloud. They seen so different. Best wishes, am honor to be read by you. Pangie xx
Date: 2/24/2024 3:30:00 PM
More POTD!!!??? Congrats- loved reading this
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Date: 2/24/2024 3:55:00 PM
Hi Paige, it surprised me, too! It was interesting how my poet- mentor in Britain, saw a line most significant~ that I totally missed After I wrote the poem, I almost changed the line…so glad I did not! One poetess saw this happen only saw 3 times in a few years. (Where a POTD and POTW are almost back to back.) I really was considering a stop to writing altogether! I shall carry on, now. And still have a long way to go. Your comments do help! Panagiota with gratitude and hugs!!
Date: 2/22/2024 8:52:00 AM
That took me back to my trip to Italy, saw the balcony that inspired Shakespeare. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 2/22/2024 9:35:00 AM
Tom, thanks for the soup mail with the extraordinary send! That must have been moving …to see the actual balcony! I found it quite impressive! Thank you for the huzzah on the POTD! Pangie xx
Date: 2/19/2024 9:11:00 AM
Lovely writing. Congrats on POTD. God bless you sweet lady. love, Gina
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Date: 2/19/2024 11:14:00 AM
Good morning Regina! Whar a nice surprise to see you, thank you for the honor of your visit today,))) hope all is well with youu.. I got a thumsbs uo from my poetry mentor….which was exciting, he can see the poeerful lines,I missed. See you soon. Live, Pandie
Date: 2/18/2024 10:07:00 AM
Really wonderful, Pangie! There is the beauty of love in your words along with a deep sadness of loss. Congratulations on your POTD AND your special POTW! So happy for you! Sending you blessings and a hug!
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Date: 2/18/2024 1:20:00 PM
What are the light it is?… to see you, Sam! We are about love and the transcendency of love of it as well! The Bard is inspirational Two poems so closely honored, iwas unbelievable! Thank you for your hug and blessings. Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 2/18/2024 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Pangie, on POTD!
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Date: 2/18/2024 1:20:00 PM
Hi Kim, and very glad to see you come back and sign this. You were one of the first ones that did.. I spoke to my poet mentor in England today with the publisher of 50 books of poetry and he told me that he loved the first line. I was shooting all other lines and I thought something was wrong with the first line. He said that’s what the poem.. That’s funny I didn’t even get that.. well, maybe that’s why he worlwide, I wish I could always write like this. I will make that commitment to myself, and you can let me know where I fall off the tracks.))) God bless you for being here today. We’ve known each other a long time and for that, my heart singsM pangie xx
Date: 2/17/2024 4:00:00 PM
Panagiota, Perfect pairing for all "Star Crossed Lovers" on Valentine's Day. -Richard
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Date: 2/17/2024 4:54:00 PM
Dearest Richard! You know, you do have apoint. My man! How very nice that you commented the day after this I was so honored to see you on the day after this was a POTD.. perhaps you missed my POTW, 2 days a ago! May you be warm this weekend. Rain plus winds in my section of CA, Pangie xx
Date: 2/17/2024 11:19:00 AM
Hello Panagiota,, congratulations on the POTD.Hugs. xxx
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Date: 2/18/2024 4:20:00 PM
Hello Panagta, Thank you for the love.ly comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx
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Date: 2/17/2024 12:36:00 PM
Hello, Darlene, a friend like you~~~ is a forever treasure! Hugs, Pangie cxx
Date: 2/17/2024 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Sorry, yesterday I was not on SOUP. I was with a dear friend and her husband's  funeral. I enjoyed reading your wonderful love write/story with a great picture. True love does last forever. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away with your win.................
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Date: 2/17/2024 6:40:00 AM
Dearest Paula, being with your friend as a source of solace is dar more significant than any POTD, ever.i do not consider it a win in any way, have you ever found me looking for one? I was in 2 contests in four years.Many of my poems astae ny stand on this, there are so maby forms yet to learb, so mant pietsI have never read, so its not in my heart to win In addition. The POTDand POTW are acts of recognition, not done by Soupers, nor are there thousands run nby poets. That is far too many~ but I realize others thrive on them.l know you get it! Thank you for being part of my to support team herel hohs,Pangie xxx
Date: 2/16/2024 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Pangie! I hope you have enjoyed you special day of recognition. I especially like the last verse; Love is meant to be eternal and happy as you have illustrated. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 2/17/2024 12:12:00 AM
Bleedings to you, friend Bill! I am so glas you were part of FRIENDS, who chose to show uo today, and an grateful too have such shining stars in my poetry universe. ,,Each of you, without question the corage and faith in myself to keep writing, And~I intend to keep anyone who signed thiis on the top of my list~ as to who is to read from here on in. Thank youL Love, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 4:52:00 PM
Lovely poem, PR. The second stanza, in particular, is amazing. So well written! Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Date: 2/16/2024 4:58:00 PM
Hi Shane Than you.. thank you for clarifying wish you liked the most. … that helps me so much.. I’m glad you came here on the special day for me I consider anybody who answers it or participated in this day very special as well. Hogs, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations Pangie on this most tragically romantic POTD, ( a lot more romantic truth be told) I like the spin you put on this enduring timeless classic! ‘To refuse on this fetid earth to stay’ what a great line amongst many! Cheers David
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Date: 2/16/2024 2:29:00 PM
Hi gavid, sso glad to see you. Thank you for stopping by today. I never expected this.. I love the poem, and I think it has quite a few good lines in it people like the last stanza most! I am glad you chose about feteid earth. Two days ago I had fun of the week. So to get poem of the day today was the shock. so glad you stopped by. Thank you, David.. Pangiexx
Date: 2/16/2024 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem about Romeo and Juliet is fabulous. Love exists in eternity. Great writing.
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Date: 2/16/2024 1:08:00 PM
Hilda, thank you..Pangie
Date: 2/16/2024 10:38:00 AM
Congrats, Pangie! Good going! You are on a roll! Bob H
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Date: 2/16/2024 2:22:00 PM
Robert, was trying to correct the error below, but mu edit buttom is not working below. Sorry. Friend was meant. Pangie
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Date: 2/16/2024 1:25:00 PM
thank you dear griend Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 10:31:00 AM
Enthusiastic Congratulations for this haunting and classical POTD, dear Pangie. Enjoy your special day! xxox
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Date: 2/16/2024 1:30:00 PM
Hii Regina, I appreciate your congratulations today, and I thank you for bringing my friend. You are a friend of me every day not sometimes.. and then thank you for that tooM Love, Pangie.cx
Date: 2/16/2024 9:57:00 AM
Dear Panagiota, in such a beautiful, poetic way; you've captured the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet- ' star crossed lovers. ' True love never ends, it lives on forever. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/16/2024 1:41:00 PM
Dear Brandy, a poet with a big heart. Th Bard understood poetry so well and the true nature of love! I enjord writing this but even more so, sibce it became POTD. Bless you Brandy. Hogs, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 9:54:00 AM
An enchanting read Pangie, such a mesmerising write. Congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 2/16/2024 1:54:00 PM
Hello Beryl,..such wonderful adjectives for this pen! Thank you, as this day is very special to me. And all my supporters made this happen. So I hope everyone’s celebrates with me.. Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the POTD! This is a great recognition for your creative work. A wonderful piece for all of us to enjoy.
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Date: 2/16/2024 1:02:00 PM
Hi Elena! It was a schock to me. Love is the best and truly…. a menorable gift. I am enjoying this POTD Day and the responses are heart warming! Love, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations Pangie on Poem Of The Day! True love is never forgotten. What a wonderful piece, romanticism recognizes a romantic poetess, you are naturally drawn in. Real poetry. Bravo! Enjoy your Day!
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Date: 2/16/2024 3:05:00 PM
:) Love you, Pangie! Champagne sips & cheers!
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Date: 2/16/2024 2:35:00 PM
Hi, Ayana! I commented hours ago but it did not take it, just wanted you to know I was not ignoring you. I am glad that you like the poem you know how much I did. There’s so much of me in Juliet or …so much of Juliet in me))) now it’s upward and onward, to even greater poetry for both of us. Love, Pangie xx
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Date: 2/16/2024 11:51:00 AM
~RIP Alex Navalny "Marter & Saint"
Date: 2/16/2024 6:31:00 AM
Back with huge congratulations for your honor with POTD Pangie! :)
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Date: 2/16/2024 12:52:00 PM
Linda, Linda! Howgreat of you to bging Congratulations Pie!)) Tastes heavebly, Love, Pangie
Date: 2/16/2024 5:40:00 AM
Pangie that is beautiful. Eternal, we remember them today. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 2/16/2024 12:21:00 PM
Thank you R,J.)) who can forget them, eh! Thet remain the epitome of etenal love. Gracias, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Great tribute to eternal lovers.
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Date: 2/16/2024 12:18:00 PM
Wow, this us my thord reply and thet are not takinng! Maybe this time will work. Thank you Cictor. Pangiie,,huggs, too))
Date: 2/16/2024 4:51:00 AM
Oh, Pangie, The bard is blushing. Beautifully done. You get the full Boston "WICKED AWESOME"
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Date: 2/16/2024 11:14:00 AM
Always, alwats a jotth hear from you, John. I love to make people feel blush! (Even the Bard). I never heard of the Boston..WICKED AWESOME! But that would be a great nic,lol. My daughter, Elena, calls me..”El Fuego!” ))) Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 4:35:00 AM
Dearest Pangie, WOW! Your words transported me to a realm where love transcends mortal boundaries, where passion knows no bounds, and where the soul's desire for eternal union finds passionate expression. The depth of emotion and the lyrical beauty inked into each stanza left me in awe. Your portrayal of Romeo and Juliet's love as an enduring flame, flickering against the backdrop of a world that seeks to confine it, is both haunting and sublime. Your words evoke a sense of timelessness and longing that is felt deeply.Moreover, your poem serves as a call to the power of love to defy even the most formidable obstacles, to transcend the limitations of our earthly existence, and to endure beyond the constraints of time itself. Congratulations on being honored as the POTD for such a masterful piece of work. Your talent shines brightly, and I have no doubt that your words will continue to inspire and uplift all who have the privilege of encountering them. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/16/2024 2:47:00 PM
David! Hurrah, I got the page to work. Thank you for the many accolades about this poem There is no use in pretending that I can write as an intelligent reply as the comment you just posted.. that would be insane. Thank you for going to the ends of the Earth to complement this poem. It shows what a big heart you have for lanother person.. I prefer this type of comment compared to a text-type comment. it is enormous help to the poet who wrote the poem. Much appreiared, Pangie xx
Date: 2/16/2024 4:03:00 AM
Pangie, congratulations on your POTD honors for your beautiful tribute to eternal love!
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Date: 2/16/2024 11:19:00 AM
Hello, Mile! You got that right! A tribute to Eternal love. After I saw the Zeferellis momovie version movie od the star crossed lovers, I was hooked on his poetry and his plays, well later movies of Romeo and Juliet can’t compare. It don’t even come close. The movie is available I think for five dollars on YouTube… See if you can. Thank you for being here today.. Hugs, Pangie cx
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