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The Star Crossed Lovers, Romeo and Juliet


       Such deep, impassioned, love
       startles our mortal ways.
       Could we possibly have that
       same eternal love?
       Flowing in our souls and blood,
       and being blind, make light of it?

       How blessed, how young, how
       fortunate,lovers they!
       To refuse on this fetid earth to stay.
       And of poison did imbibe and hence 
       dance forever in a moonlit sky.,

       Willing to live in eternity, together. oh!
       Not a beautiful flower, nor a stunning 
       sunset, no! 
       Could keep them here, why, on this so
       controlling a place!

       Be still this night and you will hear their
       enchanting and bubbling laughter..
       It whispers in trees, eternally, day and 
       night, a fortnight and foreverafter.

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              February 14, 2024

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March 20, 2024 at 4:29 PM

A belated congratulations on your POTD! An absolute masterpiece.. Such a breathtaking verse, Panagiota! Really enjoyed... Your talent shines! Many blessings to you, my friend..

Panagiota Romios

March 20, 2024 at 4:55 PM

Robertina…no problem! I miss many POTDs, please, please do not feel badly. My poet mentor cheered this one on. That made me happy.. i cannot always pen like this. I like to experiment to. I have so much to learn.Poetry was sung not read in Greece. Read your poems aloud. They seen so different. Best wishes, am honor to be read by you. Pangie xx

February 24, 2024 at 3:30 PM

More POTD!!!??? Congrats- loved reading this

Panagiota Romios

February 24, 2024 at 3:55 PM

Hi Paige, it surprised me, too! It was interesting how my poet- mentor in Britain, saw a line most significant~ that I totally missed After I wrote the poem, I almost changed the line…so glad I did not! One poetess saw this happen only saw 3 times in a few years. (Where a POTD and POTW are almost back to back.) I really was considering a stop to writing altogether! I shall carry on, now. And still have a long way to go. Your comments do help! Panagiota with gratitude and hugs!!

February 22, 2024 at 8:52 AM

That took me back to my trip to Italy, saw the balcony that inspired Shakespeare. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom

Panagiota Romios

February 22, 2024 at 9:35 AM

Tom, thanks for the soup mail with the extraordinary send! That must have been moving …to see the actual balcony! I found it quite impressive! Thank you for the huzzah on the POTD! Pangie xx

Regina Mcintosh

February 19, 2024 at 9:11 AM

Lovely writing. Congrats on POTD. God bless you sweet lady. love, Gina

Panagiota Romios

February 19, 2024 at 11:14 AM

Good morning Regina! Whar a nice surprise to see you, thank you for the honor of your visit today,))) hope all is well with youu.. I got a thumsbs uo from my poetry mentor….which was exciting, he can see the poeerful lines,I missed. See you soon. Live, Pandie

February 18, 2024 at 10:07 AM

Really wonderful, Pangie! There is the beauty of love in your words along with a deep sadness of loss. Congratulations on your POTD AND your special POTW! So happy for you! Sending you blessings and a hug!

Panagiota Romios

February 18, 2024 at 1:20 PM

What are the light it is?… to see you, Sam! We are about love and the transcendency of love of it as well! The Bard is inspirational Two poems so closely honored, iwas unbelievable! Thank you for your hug and blessings. Hugs, Pangie xx

February 17, 2024 at 4:00 PM

Panagiota, Perfect pairing for all "Star Crossed Lovers" on Valentine's Day. -Richard

Panagiota Romios

February 17, 2024 at 4:54 PM

Dearest Richard! You know, you do have apoint. My man! How very nice that you commented the day after this I was so honored to see you on the day after this was a POTD.. perhaps you missed my POTW, 2 days a ago! May you be warm this weekend. Rain plus winds in my section of CA, Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 17, 2024 at 11:19 AM

Hello Panagiota,, congratulations on the POTD.Hugs. xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 18, 2024 at 4:20 PM

Hello Panagta, Thank you for the love.ly comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx

Panagiota Romios

February 17, 2024 at 12:36 PM

Hello, Darlene, a friend like you~~~ is a forever treasure! Hugs, Pangie cxx

Paula Goldsmith

February 17, 2024 at 5:45 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Sorry, yesterday I was not on SOUP. I was with a dear friend and her husband's funeral. I enjoyed reading your wonderful love write/story with a great picture. True love does last forever. Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away with your win.................

Panagiota Romios

February 17, 2024 at 6:40 AM

Dearest Paula, being with your friend as a source of solace is dar more significant than any POTD, ever.i do not consider it a win in any way, have you ever found me looking for one? I was in 2 contests in four years.Many of my poems astae ny stand on this, there are so maby forms yet to learb, so mant pietsI have never read, so its not in my heart to win In addition. The POTDand POTW are acts of recognition, not done by Soupers, nor are there thousands run nby poets. That is far too many~ but I realize others thrive on them.l know you get it! Thank you for being part of my to support team herel hohs,Pangie xxx

February 16, 2024 at 10:40 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Pangie! I hope you have enjoyed you special day of recognition. I especially like the last verse; Love is meant to be eternal and happy as you have illustrated. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Panagiota Romios

February 17, 2024 at 12:12 AM

Bleedings to you, friend Bill! I am so glas you were part of FRIENDS, who chose to show uo today, and an grateful too have such shining stars in my poetry universe. ,,Each of you, without question the corage and faith in myself to keep writing, And~I intend to keep anyone who signed thiis on the top of my list~ as to who is to read from here on in. Thank youL Love, Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 4:52 PM

Lovely poem, PR. The second stanza, in particular, is amazing. So well written! Thank you for sharing this with us.

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 4:58 PM

Hi Shane Than you.. thank you for clarifying wish you liked the most. … that helps me so much.. I’m glad you came here on the special day for me I consider anybody who answers it or participated in this day very special as well. Hogs, Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 1:57 PM

Congratulations Pangie on this most tragically romantic POTD, ( a lot more romantic truth be told) I like the spin you put on this enduring timeless classic! ‘To refuse on this fetid earth to stay’ what a great line amongst many! Cheers David

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 2:29 PM

Hi gavid, sso glad to see you. Thank you for stopping by today. I never expected this.. I love the poem, and I think it has quite a few good lines in it people like the last stanza most! I am glad you chose about feteid earth. Two days ago I had fun of the week. So to get poem of the day today was the shock. so glad you stopped by. Thank you, David.. Pangiexx

Hilda Greenhough

February 16, 2024 at 12:59 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Your poem about Romeo and Juliet is fabulous. Love exists in eternity. Great writing.

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 1:08 PM

Hilda, thank you..Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

February 16, 2024 at 10:38 AM

Congrats, Pangie! Good going! You are on a roll! Bob H

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 2:22 PM

Robert, was trying to correct the error below, but mu edit buttom is not working below. Sorry. Friend was meant. Pangie

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 1:25 PM

thank you dear griend Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 10:31 AM

Enthusiastic Congratulations for this haunting and classical POTD, dear Pangie. Enjoy your special day! xxox

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 1:30 PM

Hii Regina, I appreciate your congratulations today, and I thank you for bringing my friend. You are a friend of me every day not sometimes.. and then thank you for that tooM Love, Pangie.cx

February 16, 2024 at 9:57 AM

Dear Panagiota, in such a beautiful, poetic way; you've captured the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet- ' star crossed lovers. ' True love never ends, it lives on forever. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 1:41 PM

Dear Brandy, a poet with a big heart. Th Bard understood poetry so well and the true nature of love! I enjord writing this but even more so, sibce it became POTD. Bless you Brandy. Hogs, Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 9:54 AM

An enchanting read Pangie, such a mesmerising write. Congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 1:54 PM

Hello Beryl,..such wonderful adjectives for this pen! Thank you, as this day is very special to me. And all my supporters made this happen. So I hope everyone’s celebrates with me.. Hugs, Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 9:19 AM

Congratulations on the POTD! This is a great recognition for your creative work. A wonderful piece for all of us to enjoy.

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 1:02 PM

Hi Elena! It was a schock to me. Love is the best and truly…. a menorable gift. I am enjoying this POTD Day and the responses are heart warming! Love, Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 8:27 AM

Congratulations Pangie on Poem Of The Day! True love is never forgotten. What a wonderful piece, romanticism recognizes a romantic poetess, you are naturally drawn in. Real poetry. Bravo! Enjoy your Day!

February 16, 2024 at 3:05 PM

:) Love you, Pangie! Champagne sips & cheers!

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 2:35 PM

Hi, Ayana! I commented hours ago but it did not take it, just wanted you to know I was not ignoring you. I am glad that you like the poem you know how much I did. There’s so much of me in Juliet or …so much of Juliet in me))) now it’s upward and onward, to even greater poetry for both of us. Love, Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 11:51 AM

~RIP Alex Navalny "Marter & Saint"

Linda Alice Fowler

February 16, 2024 at 6:31 AM

Back with huge congratulations for your honor with POTD Pangie! :)

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 12:52 PM

Linda, Linda! Howgreat of you to bging Congratulations Pie!)) Tastes heavebly, Love, Pangie

February 16, 2024 at 5:40 AM

Pangie that is beautiful. Eternal, we remember them today. Congratulations on your POTD.

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 12:21 PM

Thank you R,J.)) who can forget them, eh! Thet remain the epitome of etenal love. Gracias, Pangie xx

Victor Buhagiar

February 16, 2024 at 5:38 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Great tribute to eternal lovers.

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 12:18 PM

Wow, this us my thord reply and thet are not takinng! Maybe this time will work. Thank you Cictor. Pangiie,,huggs, too))

February 16, 2024 at 4:51 AM

Oh, Pangie, The bard is blushing. Beautifully done. You get the full Boston "WICKED AWESOME"

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 11:14 AM

Always, alwats a jotth hear from you, John. I love to make people feel blush! (Even the Bard). I never heard of the Boston..WICKED AWESOME! But that would be a great nic,lol. My daughter, Elena, calls me..”El Fuego!” ))) Hugs, Pangie xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

February 16, 2024 at 4:35 AM

Dearest Pangie, WOW! Your words transported me to a realm where love transcends mortal boundaries, where passion knows no bounds, and where the soul's desire for eternal union finds passionate expression. The depth of emotion and the lyrical beauty inked into each stanza left me in awe. Your portrayal of Romeo and Juliet's love as an enduring flame, flickering against the backdrop of a world that seeks to confine it, is both haunting and sublime. Your words evoke a sense of timelessness and longing that is felt deeply.Moreover, your poem serves as a call to the power of love to defy even the most formidable obstacles, to transcend the limitations of our earthly existence, and to endure beyond the constraints of time itself. Congratulations on being honored as the POTD for such a masterful piece of work. Your talent shines brightly, and I have no doubt that your words will continue to inspire and uplift all who have the privilege of encountering them. - Blessings, Daniel

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 2:47 PM

David! Hurrah, I got the page to work. Thank you for the many accolades about this poem There is no use in pretending that I can write as an intelligent reply as the comment you just posted.. that would be insane. Thank you for going to the ends of the Earth to complement this poem. It shows what a big heart you have for lanother person.. I prefer this type of comment compared to a text-type comment. it is enormous help to the poet who wrote the poem. Much appreiared, Pangie xx

February 16, 2024 at 4:03 AM

Pangie, congratulations on your POTD honors for your beautiful tribute to eternal love!

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 11:19 AM

Hello, Mile! You got that right! A tribute to Eternal love. After I saw the Zeferellis momovie version movie od the star crossed lovers, I was hooked on his poetry and his plays, well later movies of Romeo and Juliet can’t compare. It don’t even come close. The movie is available I think for five dollars on YouTube… See if you can. Thank you for being here today.. Hugs, Pangie cx

February 16, 2024 at 3:50 AM

Dear poetess, What a enchanting poem to wake up to this am. I love it and the fact that you wrote it on Valentine's Day, what a romantic gift to all poets here. Congratulations on the honor of POTD, quite beautiful..

Panagiota Romios

February 16, 2024 at 11:05 AM

Hi Nancy! Your description of my poem deeply touched my heart. Sch great high ratings! You humble me to the max. I am utterly glad to celebraye this honor with a pietess whoo ons a huge hear,. Thank you Nancy, Hugs, Pangie xx

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