Maurice Yvonne Poet Free verse

The Stairs To Your Bedroom

naked together
you clothe me in the fabric of your desire
all the while soothing my want
your lips part and make a smile 
and i die. i die inside. i die inside and out
time moves too quickly
before i know it you leave
all left is a covered memory 
barely fills the insatiable me
until once again it's we 

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Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2014 at 3:41 PM I love this one. It's short and it does what you wanted it to do: capture that sinking feeling of not being with the one you love. I think it was very nice the way you changed the me to "we" in the final rhyme. Gotta fave it!!

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2014 at 3:39 PM Maurice, I am slowly making my way to having viewed every single one of your poems. Now let me see this one. It looks intriguing.

James Fraser September 13, 2014 at 11:41 AM Warm, delightful, tender and loving. A joy to read Maurice, James :)

Faye Gibson August 29, 2014 at 8:00 PM A lovely write, Maurice. Maurice Yvonne August 31, 2014 at 10:13 PM thank you so much for your support.

Eileen Manassian August 28, 2014 at 4:40 PM OH!!! This one is fabulous! I love this kind of write. Well done, Maurice...VERY well done! Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 1:42 PM that thrills me to no end thank you.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 28, 2014 at 5:41 AM Enjoyed your passionate thoughts on love and romance, Maurice Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 1:37 PM It always pleases me when you visit. Thank you for your kind words.

Tim Smith August 27, 2014 at 8:05 PM Well done my friend....very passionate.... Tim Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 1:36 PM thanks Tim.

Jan Allison August 27, 2014 at 7:21 PM a passionate write Maurice - no stairs to my bedroom I live in a bungalow LOL hugs Jan xxx Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 1:39 PM LOl you do make me smile Maurice:-) hugs Jan xx Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 1:35 PM that's a little queer, now I'm top of me. Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 1:34 PM I'm thinking of changing the title to "the hallway to your bedroom" wink wink say no more say no more... Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 1:31 PM

Shadow Hamilton August 27, 2014 at 6:30 PM desire fulfilled what could be better? Maurice a pen of love hugs Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 1:20 PM Thank you for your kind words. I think most of us gravitate towards the idea of eternal love.