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The Stained Glass Forest

 
Oh, the forest whispers to me, as stained leaves on the ground crinkle; and birds chirp and trill in a tree, but too soon those leaves will wrinkle. As I walk the wind groans and moans, oh, the forest whispers to me; soon the branches will be bare bones, the crows cawing is like a plea. Squirrels chirrup running with glee, through the leaves that swirl, twirl and dance; oh, the forest whispers to me, the beauty puts me in a trance. A stream that gurgles and thunders, and ducks still quack and float carefree; so many sweet scenes and wonders, oh, the forest whispers to me. _______________________ October 16, 2021 Poetry/Quatern/ The Stained Glass Forest Copyright Protected, ID-10-1397-695-16 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Onomatopoeia sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 11/13/2021 Fourth Place Poem of the Day October 18, 2021
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Allison Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win, I LOVE the picture too!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Jan, thanks for the congrats. This picture is one of my favorites, I have used it for many nature theme poems. Hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Watt Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 3:09 PM
Constance, this was a lovely walk through the forest with beautiful nature imagery, excellent rhymes, and of course your carefully selected onomatopoeia words. A delight for the eyes, ears, and soul. I agree with you, beauty can put us in a trance. Belated congrats for your well-deserved honor of POTD... going in my faves. Blessings ~ John
La France Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:26 PM
John, thank you for taking the walk with me and for the compliment on my poem and the congrats and the FAV, blessing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Jones Avatar
November 15, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Lovely write and deserving of a win!
La France Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Karen, thank you for the compliment on my poem, appreciae ~ love and serenity _Constance
Agustin Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 5:31 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
La France Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 2:19 PM
Beata, thanks for the compliment and congrats, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
Pinet Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your outstanding poem earned a distinguished place in my onomatopoeia contest, well done my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Emile, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my fine placement and the compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 7:26 AM
Lovely, Constance! Congratulations on POTD!
La France Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD, love and serenity _Constance
Lawrence Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 5:58 PM
Just lovely Constance. When we are still sounds enter our beings..the magical sounds of the forest and all of her creatures. The sounds of the quiet whispers are heard when we open our heart ...beautifully expressed. Congrats on POTD. Sending peaceful thoughts to you, Susan :)
La France Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the lovely comment and the congrats on my POTD, peace ~ love and serenity _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 3:56 PM
Congrats on POTD... LOVE THIS. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Gina, thanks for the compliment and the congrats on my POTD, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
Gondolf Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 2:48 AM
Your poetry whispers to me and puts me in a trance, Constance, congrats on POTD. Hugs, John
La France Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:09 AM
John, thanks for the lovely comment and compliment ad for the congrats on my POTD, hugs ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Descriptive, delightful poem, Constance--deserving of the title POTD. Janice
La France Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Janice, thank you for the compliment on my poem and my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Beautiful poetry Constance, sight and sounds of the forest described perfectly, excellently written for Emile’s contest. Congratulations on poem of the day, a well deserved honour… Belle
La France Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Belle, thanks for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Koplin Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Wow Constance! Such vivid imagery, well done and thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations on potd!!
La France Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Mark, thanks for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Nicole Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 5:13 PM
"Oh, the forest whispers to me, the beauty puts me in a trance" Such a magical thought. Soooo dreamy. The image you have placed matches your words perfectly. I am in complete awe. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
La France Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Brandy, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment and congratulations on my POTD, I love that image too, blessings ~ love and serenity _Constance
Watt Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 4:35 PM
Constance, beautiful use of the quatern style and the onomatopoeia examples from nature to depict this pastoral autumn setting. Congratulations for the deserved acknowledgement of POTD, enjoy the honor. Blessings ~ John
La France Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 7:14 AM
John, thank you for the nice comment and compliment and the congratulations, blessings ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Well done Congratulations!
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:37 PM
Caren, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Liguori Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 12:09 PM
The trees bow to your artistry.
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Robert, thank you for the beautiful compliment, that is so nice of you ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Ashley Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Dear Constance, your wondrous poem is a delight for the senses and the soul. Congratulations for POTD honors with this gem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Susan, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Hankins Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 11:57 AM
Beautiful writing, aptly rewarded. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Constance. So well-deserved!
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Milt, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD, ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Logan Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 10:42 AM
A truly great write, Constance, for potd. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Jenna, thanks for the compliment and for the congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Alex Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Wow! None can compete with you. Great work. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Proxenos Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Constance I raved about this poem and so thrilled it got POTD - it is an exceptional write and the honor bestowed upon you so truly deserved - congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Jennifer, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD, friendship ~ love and serenity _Constance
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 9:19 AM
such an enchanting poem Constance, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:43 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats on my POTD ~love and serenity _Constance
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your amazing POTD, Constance - this sounds surreal with all the special onomatopoeia words! What a beauty! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Mala, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Sands Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :)
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Heidi, thanks for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! An amazing write. Your pen was working overtime on this "Beautiful" poem. Have a great/blessed autumn day.............
La France Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 9:02 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations on my POTD and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
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