The Stained Glass Forest

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Oh, the forest whispers to me, as stained leaves on the ground crinkle; and birds chirp and trill in a tree, but too soon those leaves will wrinkle. As I walk the wind groans and moans, oh, the forest whispers to me; soon the branches will be bare bones, the crows cawing is like a plea. Squirrels chirrup running with glee, through the leaves that swirl, twirl and dance; oh, the forest whispers to me, the beauty puts me in a trance. A stream that gurgles and thunders, and ducks still quack and float carefree; so many sweet scenes and wonders, oh, the forest whispers to me. _______________________ October 16, 2021 Poetry/Quatern/ The Stained Glass Forest Copyright Protected, ID-10-1397-695-16 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Onomatopoeia sponsor, Emile Pinet, Judged 11/13/2021 Fourth Place Poem of the Day October 18, 2021

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Date: 11/18/2021 12:24:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win, I LOVE the picture too!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2021 6:11:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the congrats. This picture is one of my favorites, I have used it for many nature theme poems. Hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/16/2021 3:09:00 PM
Constance, this was a lovely walk through the forest with beautiful nature imagery, excellent rhymes, and of course your carefully selected onomatopoeia words. A delight for the eyes, ears, and soul. I agree with you, beauty can put us in a trance. Belated congrats for your well-deserved honor of POTD... going in my faves. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 11/17/2021 1:26:00 PM
John, thank you for taking the walk with me and for the compliment on my poem and the congrats and the FAV, blessing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 11/15/2021 8:59:00 AM
Lovely write and deserving of a win!
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Date: 11/16/2021 9:59:00 AM
Karen, thank you for the compliment on my poem, appreciae ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/14/2021 5:31:00 AM
WOW! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 11/14/2021 2:19:00 PM
Beata, thanks for the compliment and congrats, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/13/2021 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations Constance! Your outstanding poem earned a distinguished place in my onomatopoeia contest, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 11/13/2021 2:15:00 PM
Emile, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my fine placement and the compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/21/2021 7:26:00 AM
Lovely, Constance! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/21/2021 8:32:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD, love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/19/2021 5:58:00 PM
Just lovely Constance. When we are still sounds enter our beings..the magical sounds of the forest and all of her creatures. The sounds of the quiet whispers are heard when we open our heart ...beautifully expressed. Congrats on POTD. Sending peaceful thoughts to you, Susan :)
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Date: 10/20/2021 7:00:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the lovely comment and the congrats on my POTD, peace ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/19/2021 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on POTD... LOVE THIS. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 10/20/2021 7:01:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the compliment and the congrats on my POTD, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/19/2021 2:48:00 AM
Your poetry whispers to me and puts me in a trance, Constance, congrats on POTD. Hugs, John
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Date: 10/19/2021 7:09:00 AM
John, thanks for the lovely comment and compliment ad for the congrats on my POTD, hugs ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 9:14:00 PM
Descriptive, delightful poem, Constance--deserving of the title POTD. Janice
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Date: 10/19/2021 7:10:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the compliment on my poem and my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 5:52:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Constance, sight and sounds of the forest described perfectly, excellently written for Emile’s contest. Congratulations on poem of the day, a well deserved honour… Belle
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Date: 10/19/2021 7:11:00 AM
Belle, thanks for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 5:19:00 PM
Wow Constance! Such vivid imagery, well done and thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations on potd!!
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Date: 10/19/2021 7:11:00 AM
Mark, thanks for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 5:13:00 PM
"Oh, the forest whispers to me, the beauty puts me in a trance" Such a magical thought. Soooo dreamy. The image you have placed matches your words perfectly. I am in complete awe. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 10/19/2021 7:12:00 AM
Brandy, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment and congratulations on my POTD, I love that image too, blessings ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 4:35:00 PM
Constance, beautiful use of the quatern style and the onomatopoeia examples from nature to depict this pastoral autumn setting. Congratulations for the deserved acknowledgement of POTD, enjoy the honor. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 10/19/2021 7:14:00 AM
John, thank you for the nice comment and compliment and the congratulations, blessings ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Well done Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:37:00 PM
Caren, thanks so much for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 12:09:00 PM
The trees bow to your artistry.
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:38:00 PM
Robert, thank you for the beautiful compliment, that is so nice of you ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 11:59:00 AM
Dear Constance, your wondrous poem is a delight for the senses and the soul. Congratulations for POTD honors with this gem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:39:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 11:57:00 AM
Beautiful writing, aptly rewarded. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D., Constance. So well-deserved!
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:40:00 PM
Milt, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD, ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 10:42:00 AM
A truly great write, Constance, for potd. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:40:00 PM
Jenna, thanks for the compliment and for the congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 10:28:00 AM
Wow! None can compete with you. Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:41:00 PM
Christuraj, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 10:09:00 AM
Constance I raved about this poem and so thrilled it got POTD - it is an exceptional write and the honor bestowed upon you so truly deserved - congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:42:00 PM
Jennifer, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations on my POTD, friendship ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 9:19:00 AM
such an enchanting poem Constance, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:43:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the compliment and the congrats on my POTD ~love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :)
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:44:00 PM
Heidi, thanks for the compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your amazing POTD, Constance - this sounds surreal with all the special onomatopoeia words! What a beauty! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 10/18/2021 3:44:00 PM
Mala, thank you for the comment, compliment and congratulations on my POTD ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 10/18/2021 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! An amazing write. Your pen was working overtime on this "Beautiful" poem. Have a great/blessed autumn day.............
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Date: 10/18/2021 9:02:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations on my POTD and the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance
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