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The Stain You Left

Triple Tetractys 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Oh My soul Bleeds for you No time to grieve The stain you left took pity upon me I needed your rain to quench my lost thirst no pardoning for my ache inside me I need to forgive you for affliction the stain you left broke my silence once more Syllable Count: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, ~ 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, ~ 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 Syllables Checked: howmanysyllables.com Date Written: July 15, 2016

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Date: 7/25/2016 2:44:00 PM
Your Triple Tetractys poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2016 4:38:00 PM
Hi Laura, This is beautiful. Congrats on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/22/2016 1:55:00 PM
Very emotional and well-written, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/22/2016 3:23:00 PM
thank you Sweet Sandra lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 7/16/2016 6:32:00 AM
A beautiful write once again for your much loved sister :) Really great:)
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Date: 7/22/2016 3:23:00 PM
thank you Jo m:)-luloo
Date: 7/15/2016 12:24:00 PM
Heart touching:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/22/2016 3:22:00 PM
thank you Madhupriya :)-luloo

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