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The Space Between

The space between the here and now and what will lie ahead can be whatever we allow so often it is said The wonder of my mind for what it is I’ll find has not yet been designed Yet to be seen the space between

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/27/2022 7:44:00 PM

Love this Mike ! Poignant and real. I like the nuances and the power . Hugs and congratulations! Susan :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/1/2022 3:15:00 PM

Thanks so much Susan!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2022 10:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a write. Love your line, "Yet to be seen the space between." Have a great/blessed day..................

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/27/2022 4:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula!!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/25/2022 5:39:00 AM

Congratulations for this great poem Mike. It actually brought me a sense of relief and letting go. My mind can think and worry too much. A Fave for me :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/25/2022 7:56:00 AM

Heidi, Thanks so much! Happy Friday xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2022 3:42:00 PM

most profound, Mike. I really like your poem. Congrats on the win

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/25/2022 3:37:00 AM

Thank so so much Andrea xxoo

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/22/2022 9:15:00 AM

Nothing missing from the Universe; the space between particles, thoughts (awareness) are a lack of consciousness~life's unexplored, seamless continuity yet to be know. Love this, Mike. Brilliant!

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/25/2022 3:37:00 AM

Thank you Joe, I appreciate your kind words!!

Silent One

Date: 2/22/2022 2:01:00 AM

We all wonder about the unknown...hopefully you get your answers my friend..

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/25/2022 3:38:00 AM

I wish for you the same Silent One!!! Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/21/2022 7:19:00 PM

The Eye of the Seeker has sought a space between what is and what will be ~ and you have provided it for him 'to a T.' Superb contest entry, Mike... great poem with or without the contest. Cheers, Gershon

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/25/2022 3:38:00 AM

Thanks GW, you know how to make a guy feel good!!

Deb M

Date: 2/21/2022 8:00:00 AM

Hi Mike….your words are so very true….shame will we ever know the answer until we get there! You write lovely heartfelt poems Mike….genuine! Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/25/2022 3:39:00 AM

Thank you Deb, Happy Friday xxoo

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/20/2022 4:55:00 AM

Beautiful words of wisdom! Thank you for participating … congrats on your win, hope you enjoyed the Quietus form!

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/20/2022 5:16:00 AM

Thanks so much! Yes, I did enjoy the form and had fun working with it! I am so glad the you liked it and so happy for my placement in your contest!! Happy Sunday!