The Sound of Shovels Scrape

A man once knelt beside a mirrored pool,
stared into the eyes of a faithless fool.
An empty soul who made a devil's pact,
to turn away from truth in search of fact.

With no light to shine on this troubled trail,
he then became lost, then slipped and fell.
Leaving all he knew for a promised lie,
he lived in darkness til the day he died.

Now all alone deep in his earthly tomb,
he ponders his choice of eternal doom.
He is kept awake from his peaceful sleep,
by the mournful hymns while the widows weep.

Sometimes he hears the sound of shovels scrape,
he knows another fool has sealed their fate.




3/10/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Turning away from truth in search of fact makes me think of the "tests" some apply to faith. They will not believe what they cannot prove. Some of the darkest people I know accept nothing based on faith. A compelling poem that helps set the mood for the approach of Easter. Beautifully written, Laura. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Rushing Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 10:11 AM
Thank you Carolyn and Laura thanks you.
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 3:38 PM
The couplet at the end is especially powerful!
Leiser Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 12:29 PM
I really liked this excellent poem, Wren...the message, the rhythmic meter are all superb! Congrats on your win! :)
Rushing Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Thank you Laura!
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 12:09 PM
Back with congrats:)
Rushing Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Thank you P.S.!
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 10:55 AM
quite chilling imagery Wren congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Rushing Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Jan!
Canerdy Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 9:57 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Wren! Sad--but so beautiful! Janice
Rushing Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Thank you Janice!
Lawless Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Well done Wren, an expose of the ultimate "Let's Make A Deal".......oops...wrong door.....
Rushing Avatar
March 16, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Thank you John!
Awtry Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:56 AM
exquisite phrasing. each line a work of art.
Rushing Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Thank you P.S.!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 2:08 AM
Wren, your take on the contest is gorgeously done, so subtle, and yet, so true to what is happening. Nice one indeed my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Rushing Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 5:30 PM
Thank you Caren! Have a blessed day my friend!
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