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Soothing Star Premiere Contest Winner

My legs give out            and I sink                    onto the grassy blanket, whose thorns feel like velvet   against parched skin.         I close my eyes and    d r i f t               away..    from this cruel confinement    where fleeting time waits    for none. I am drawn awake. It’s that feeling all over again. It allays my ears, casting away the shrieks and screams that haunt them. This is the muse the world needs. Melodies and lyrics are stars to its a b y s s. The music bewitches, I tiptoe on notes dancing in octaves. I call the tune ~ I shall stay here until the music dies. For in the mansion beside my run-down hut, they begin to blow the trumpet.

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Date: 6/5/2020 2:11:00 AM
This is simply EXCELLENT! Congratulations on your worthy Trophy win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/1/2020 7:37:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:14:00 PM
Love the depth of your journey through your words. Beautifully and brilliantly penned. Congratulations on your win Sneha :)
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:10:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Sneha, I love the form and grace of the flow of your poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/1/2020 8:27:00 AM
What a lovely, descriptive poem, Sneha! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 6/1/2020 5:44:00 AM
Hi Sneha, this poem is a beauty. Congratulations on your big win. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/13/2019 7:58:00 PM
love this line the most but the whole is amazing....melodies and lyrics are stars to its abyss. congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/11/2019 9:43:00 AM
I love your creativity ~ congrats on a well deserved win!
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Date: 9/11/2019 8:24:00 AM
This is so cool, congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/11/2019 7:55:00 AM
Lovely, Sneha. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/11/2019 3:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 1/1/2019 1:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sneha. Well done.
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Date: 12/25/2018 4:34:00 AM
Stunning poetry! Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest and have a Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/24/2018 12:41:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Sneha, you have an incredible talent for one so young:-) hugs Janxx
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Date: 12/24/2018 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations Sneha on your win!
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Date: 12/24/2018 11:45:00 AM
You get better by the week dear Sneha and a very creative presentation to top it off.
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Date: 12/24/2018 11:32:00 AM
Sneha, congrats on your win on Mile 2 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. I am so glad you entered so I can follow you and read more of your poetry :) ~Mark
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Date: 12/24/2018 10:30:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 9/11/2018 8:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sneha. Well done.
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Date: 9/11/2018 7:01:00 AM
Excellent use of form to augment the beauty of this terrific write Sneha. The line breaks and shifts really accentuated the impact slowing the pace, allowing time to breath. Thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:37:00 PM
just dropping by your stellar poem to say hello
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Date: 6/12/2016 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations Sneha..... on your well deserved top placement. Love the imaginative formatting and surprising word pairings. I wil be reading more of your work as time allows. Best, SuZ
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Date: 6/12/2016 9:19:00 AM
Excellent, Sneha! You tackled this challenge like a pro! Congratulations on being placed first! ~ All the best...paul
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Date: 6/12/2016 9:34:00 AM
I'm very glad you like it! Thank you so very much for your lovely comments and support.. :) :)
Date: 6/11/2016 11:57:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Sneha. Impressive write. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/12/2016 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much!! :) :)
Date: 6/10/2016 8:11:00 AM
Wonderful write Sneha. It is very engaging. Love the unique format.
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Sneha Rv
Date: 6/12/2016 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much!! :) :)
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