The Soldier's Death

I smell the coppery, sweet scent of blood where a soldier died, his face in the mud. I mourn the soldier's death. War is a putrid, expanding abyss where a day's food and water feels like bliss. I mourn the soldier's death. I fight a war that I know can't be won, for amidst this carnage, I am but one. I mourn the soldier's death. God has forsaken and abandoned me, silently ignoring my anguished plea. I mourn the soldier's death. A child soldier's life is stripped of all fun, afraid the killing will never be done. I mourn the soldier's death. My mind is numb; I cannot shed a tear, there is nothing left inside me but fear. I mourn the soldier's death. I wish I had wings to soar through the sky, I'd leave in a heartbeat if I could fly. I mourn the soldier's death. My future looks murky; nothing is clear, I will be lucky to survive out here. I mourn the soldier's death.
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Peck Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 10:03 AM
So sad, Emile, and so beautifully written. A difficult subject to write about. Congratulations on your win.
Pinet Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 5:52 AM
Thanks, Ann, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this---and yes, for courageously exposing war's grim reality' in your awesome poetic way. God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Thanks, Beata, your comments are most welcome and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Alex Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 8:49 AM
"War is a putrid expanding abyss where peaceful hopes soon get nipped in the bud" - Beautiful verses. Whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 9:28 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, your comments are most welcome and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Zahid Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 5:29 AM
I can see this poem of yours has secured 6th place in the contest. Congratulations
Pinet Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Thanks, Paghunda, Your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Well done, a worthy win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Thanks Line, Your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write, the words truly touched my heart, this of all my themes was the one I loved the most. Well done!
Pinet Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thank you Constance, you honor me with this placement in your contest my friend, Emile.
Wigley Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Gritty, raw and bleak, as is war. An excellent piece, Emile, well done. Regards, Viv
Pinet Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thanks Viv, your comments are most welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Roper Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Great poem once again. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pinet Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 7:15 AM
Thanks Eve, your comments are most welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Way to do Broken Wing's contest!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 7:34 PM
You really tuned into how the soldier must be thinking and feeling, Emile. It's so true and sad. I recently saw the movie THE POST, when in '71, the newspapers were able to give proof positive how USELESS the Viet Nam war was and how the great leaders all knew they were sending out boys to death and only doing it to save face and not back down from a war that was already lost. It's so terrible, isn't it?
Pinet Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Thanks Andres, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile. PS, I love your books, thanks so much for sending them!
Hopper Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 6:54 PM
A bit heartbreaking and vivid. Excellent pen!
Pinet Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Anna, I had to expand on the poem to meet the contest rules...I treasure your comments my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Wow!! Well done, Emile.I had a different angle for the theme I love yours better. Good luck in the contest..Hugs Eve ~`*
Pinet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Thanks ever so much Eve, I had to expand on the poem to meet the contest rules...I treasure your comments my friend, Emile.
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January 13, 2018 at 3:11 PM
Great write Emile... God luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
Pinet Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Thanks Akkina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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