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The Soldier's Death

"THE SOLDIER'S DEATH" Nick could not save Private Johnny from death, the task seemed so simple on the front line- He held him as he took his final breath, Johnny had stepped on a shielded land mine, pride and glory were no longer divine. Johnny’s blood was dripping from injury, shrapnel damaged Nick’s eyes he just couldn’t see- But he felt Johnny’s poor heart stop beating, it was no longer the land of the free, this memory of death kept repeating. His lifeless body free to return home, Nick knew he had to face Johnny’s widow- She had been abandoned and left alone, full of shock, astounded with constant woe. But Nick knew the pain only she could know. He arrived at the wake and saw his wife, he could see her anguish; tormented strife- she saw Nick and instantly felt better, even though the pain cut like a sharp knife. It was then Nick gave her Johnny’s letter. She wept with him and they hugged in relief, read the letter and couldn’t believe her eyes- Filled with such joy and even disbelief, Johnny had left her a stunning surprise. ‘Twas a jade necklace he won as a prize, at the downtown Baghdad gala last Spring. She loved it; it matched her great-grandma’s ring, now she could wear them as a matching set- She knew in her heart he’d do anything, even give her something she couldn’t forget. The Magic Of Three - Poetry Contest checked syllables: howmanysyllables.com Sponsor, Broken Wings January 12th, 2018

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Date: 2/13/2018 8:59:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful and emotional poem, this theme was my favorite
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Date: 2/13/2018 12:25:00 AM
A fine write, Laura, love the ending. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 2/12/2018 10:00:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:25:00 PM
Very touching, A well deserved 1st place! Mick
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Date: 2/11/2018 10:15:00 PM
Wonderful, heart-rending narrative---with an uplifting last stanza! Truly a deserving winner! Congrats! ~Gershon Wolf
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Date: 2/11/2018 5:44:00 PM
What a touching story. Well deserved, first place win, Laura.
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Date: 2/11/2018 4:53:00 PM
Wow, great write luloo, congratulations on ur first placement :)
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:53:00 PM
Great write, Laura, luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/12/2018 11:48:00 AM
Wonderful write. It conveys the sadness of war. Enjoyed immensely. Great pen.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/13/2018 6:15:00 AM
many thanks dear Frank ;)-luloo
Date: 1/12/2018 8:03:00 AM
This is well penned with deep thoughts and subtle strokes, painting your words with the brush of reality that gives them energy. You process a poetic soul that allows you to breath magic into your words. Your word choices are compassionate, descriptive, and imaginative. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/13/2018 6:15:00 AM
thank you sweet Emile ;)-luloo

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