The Snowman Contest

The snowman Jason built was of extraordinary size
From the tip of his black top hat to his huge bulbous thighs
Jason’s greatest challenge was finding something for the eyes 
But no buttons were big enough; he had to improvise

Mom watched as he scurried through the house, searching for supplies
From the freezer Jason tossed out frozen peas and French fries
Mom thought her son’s efforts were cute, so she did not chastise
She went to the bedroom and returned to find a surprise

Jason had taken not one, but both, of her fresh-baked pies
She ran to the window, the situation to apprise
Mom saw wee Jason on a ladder built for a high rise
“It’s mine,” she heard him say, “I’ll be taking the biggest prize!”

To spoil her son’s moment, Jason’s Mom thought would be unwise
She laughed when she saw her son place pies for the snowman’s eyes
His snowman was worthy of first place, judges did apprise
But they had no dessert till sun caused the snowman’s demise




10/19/14
Plentitude of Pies Contest entry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/9/2014 9:02:00 AM
Funny write, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:21:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:59:00 PM
This was fun, congrats.
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:04:00 AM
Diane, I love the snowman pie, so much fun and a great tale. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/5/2014 1:48:00 PM
This is a lovely and original write, Diane. I see that excellent poetry runs in the family. Good thing you found an understanding mum to fit in this Monorhyme! I quite enjoyed:) // paul
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Date: 11/4/2014 1:18:00 PM
Ahh!! Cute one..Is it based on a true story?..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I enjoyed writing that one..Sara
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Diane Locksley
Date: 11/4/2014 1:34:00 PM
No, it's just a storyline that came to me.
Date: 10/31/2014 9:06:00 PM
Now that would be one amazing snowman to see on the street!! VEry cute story this is indeed!! And I just noticed it is for that plenitude of pies contest. How imaginative.
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Date: 10/26/2014 10:58:00 AM
hope this sweet and heart-warming write will be a big winner, Diane. Glad to see your contest has nearly filled and hope you'll have many more x
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Date: 10/19/2014 5:55:00 PM
Very clever write - and a totally unique take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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