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The Snake

Your poisoned kiss is no more harmful than a bee sting to a man who has a cure for serpent's love. I'd rather not endure this unrequited craziness again. The middle of the night, the lamp, the pen, the virgin notebook and the impure, half-naked thoughts of you. You won't lure the author in a trap, nay, dear Anne. Ink in the blood - that is my antidote. This sonnet is my magic spell, so mote it be. Alas, it's must be put remiss. There is the snake as pretty as a woman, as deadliest as love so no human is able to survive its poisoned kiss.

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Date: 4/29/2019 5:51:00 AM
I dated Anne, she was a rose in full bloom* Her love was waiting tunnel full of doom* Her laugh a cry of purest agony* And heart totally devoid of integrity.* Ah, but her soft petals were sweetest black.* Giving cover for courage I did lack.* And within dearest torment was her kiss.* And death would come, if once heard her evil hiss.* Your sonnet is a gem..
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/29/2019 10:13:00 AM
Sweet heaven, what a wonderful words! Another comment that makes me blush) Thank you very much, Robert.
Date: 4/17/2019 8:18:00 AM
Every woman is Eve, in a way. Especially Annes) Thanks, Caren.
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Date: 4/17/2019 1:06:00 AM
Ah, you have given me all sorts of perspectives about Anne, only I have always thought of her as Eve.
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